Hello, if I may give a feedback about your novel (Boarding Boys). I find it quite interesting. I even laugh out loud with all the jokes and sarcasm. I'm used to be as Cayden's shoe and even been called as MR. NO, DIRECTOR'S BRAIN & LAZER MOUTH and all other names.
The thing that I need to know is the part 30 is quite a QUESTION MARKED???. Was it supposed to be FITZ or someone else i.e. Coach Kent? If your referring to FITZ, I believe you might kill the epic of it. Here's my point of view for you to reconsider:
1. We all know that Cayden doesn't tolerate lies at all. Reference with El's incident and when he retaliate everyone that he gave his point of view (based on the whole chapter).
2. It's in our gene (me myself and Cayden) because we do not tolerate lies and more lies.
3. If it's going to be FITZ, then I would found that the story is basically similar with happy ending of forgiveness (which I find it quite similar with other novels that has the so called living happily ever after. Duhhhh....
Therefore, if it's Coach Clark Kent, then there is something interesting going on. Here are my points or suggestion.
1. We know who the first crush of Cayden, as you've given us the hint based on the first day he is being introduced to the School. We know that Cayden was really pissed off for that.
2. You did mentioned that Cayden do have a background of his first love. It's really suits him.
3. If Clark does have a feeling for Cayden, it would be another EPIC of what we're expecting when two alpha is fighting for Cayden ( I'm referring to FITZ & COACH KENT).
Anyway, keep up the dirty jokes and sarcasm all the way. For those who does not tolerate the vulgar words, they should keep it to themselves. Fact is isn't these world is like this all these times?
Cheers