BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          	
          	I haven't been working on PURGE (the rewrite) much at all, but one reason is because I've been putting a lot more thought into a future, semi-related story.
          	(The other reasons would be being busy with life, feeling unmotivated, and just investing my time into other hobbies.)
          	
          	I wanted to ask if it would be enjoyable for y'all if I instead put my focus onto this future story and put this story out for you all.
          	
          	The story itself is one of my most planned-out works ever, but I'm still running through drafts.
          	For satisfaction's sake, here's one of the drafts of the name and description.
          	
          	- - -
          	"LIGHT IN THE DARK"
          	
          	Remnant; a small, remaining part, trace, or surviving group left behind after the rest has been used, removed, or destroyed.
          	
          	Home has always been this way, people bright as every color, fighting to survive against Grimm and their own. Driven by desperation, morality, origin, promises, and so much more.
          	
          	That light of hope seems to flicker and fade with every passing day.
          	
          	And something new rises to take its place.
          	
          	He will not falter. He will not dim.
          	
          	Crashing waves and blinding lightning, let Yinite Storm shoulder the fighting.
          	
          	There’s something different about him. With every battle, every choice, every line he refuses to cross, he refuses to abandon his mission.
          	
          	As conflicts rise and the world of Remnant grows more unstable, Yinite Storm is pulled into a path that stretches far beyond survival or reputation.
          	
          	What starts as a journey to prove himself slowly becomes something much harder to control.
          	
          	Follow the son of Yang Xiao Long as he bears burdens no one man should endure, changing himself in ways for the sole reason of; "For Humanity."
          	- - -
          	
          	Tell me what you think of this idea! 
          	
          	Ciao Long!

BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          
          I haven't been working on PURGE (the rewrite) much at all, but one reason is because I've been putting a lot more thought into a future, semi-related story.
          (The other reasons would be being busy with life, feeling unmotivated, and just investing my time into other hobbies.)
          
          I wanted to ask if it would be enjoyable for y'all if I instead put my focus onto this future story and put this story out for you all.
          
          The story itself is one of my most planned-out works ever, but I'm still running through drafts.
          For satisfaction's sake, here's one of the drafts of the name and description.
          
          - - -
          "LIGHT IN THE DARK"
          
          Remnant; a small, remaining part, trace, or surviving group left behind after the rest has been used, removed, or destroyed.
          
          Home has always been this way, people bright as every color, fighting to survive against Grimm and their own. Driven by desperation, morality, origin, promises, and so much more.
          
          That light of hope seems to flicker and fade with every passing day.
          
          And something new rises to take its place.
          
          He will not falter. He will not dim.
          
          Crashing waves and blinding lightning, let Yinite Storm shoulder the fighting.
          
          There’s something different about him. With every battle, every choice, every line he refuses to cross, he refuses to abandon his mission.
          
          As conflicts rise and the world of Remnant grows more unstable, Yinite Storm is pulled into a path that stretches far beyond survival or reputation.
          
          What starts as a journey to prove himself slowly becomes something much harder to control.
          
          Follow the son of Yang Xiao Long as he bears burdens no one man should endure, changing himself in ways for the sole reason of; "For Humanity."
          - - -
          
          Tell me what you think of this idea! 
          
          Ciao Long!

BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          
          I'm a bit late with this, but yesterday was my birthday. It was nice.
          
          I'd love to work on the story more, but life is making that a little harder, but I swear I continue planning everything out day after day.
          
          Just wanted to share this a bit. Thank you for your time if you're reading this, have a great day!
          
          Ciao Long!

BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          
          After... 2 and a half years... I finally finished that damn second chapter of Hollow Heart...
          
          Jesus Christ... Please go read it. SKIP THE FIRST CHAPTER OR AT LEAST THE LEMON PART.
          
          The second chapter is clean of NSFW, and I honestly made myself cry once or twice with what I cooked.
          
          This one is all about Sienna, the underappreciated best girl.
          
          Ciao Long...

BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          
          Consider this a "patch note" or something, but I adjusted the date in Chapters 4 & 5 from August 30th to August 25th, since the 30th was in the middle of the week and the 25th was a Monday— thus beginning the week of classes at Beacon.
          
          Ciao Long!
          
          (Hope you're enjoying the rewrite, if you're reading it.)

BloodStorm1319

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Howdy!
          
          Hey Readers, did you know that the Nevermore in Players and Pieces is 150 feet long?
          
          For reference, Monsterverse Godzilla is 300 feet tall.
          
          Now let's compare that to the Pilot's Titans.
          
          ~20 feet tall.
          
          What the fuck.
          
          Oh, and I spent a few hours running the math, they'd be roughly the weight of a fully-loaded 747.
          
          I'm... gonna think for a while on this one.
          
          Ciao Long...

BloodStorm1319

@JamaicanFootFungus That's genius enough I'll save it for later use. I didn't impliment it this chapter, due to the fact I feel like the Titans don't have the mobility necessary to do so. With Remnantian resources, perhaps they can upgrade a bit... 
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JamaicanFootFungus

Oh Lord Jesus… well, a Nevermore is far less technologically advanced than a Titan. Now what would be sick as hell to see is a scaled up version of how pilots can sort of “execute” a Titan by climbing up onto it and removing/destroying the power source (forgive any inaccuracies, I’ve never actually played Titanfall) but instead with the Titan climbing up onto the Nevermore to sort of “execute” it, if that makes sense.
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BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          
          I've officially decided to make a discord server specifically for this book series. I'll announce the invite once I release Chapter 2 (still brainstorming at the moment), where I hope to see you all there. If you wish not to join, that's perfectly fine with me, but I'd love to interact with my readers.
          
          Ciao Long!

Its_Fr0st

@BloodStorm1319 doesn’t stop me if I go through with a rewrite
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BloodStorm1319

@Its_Fr0st You literally have #10 on the rankings for the ODST tag.
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Its_Fr0st

Now I wanna rewrite my story.
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BloodStorm1319

Howdy.
          
          Hello, one and all.
          
          I'd like to present;
          
          PURGE.
          
          The rewrite of Pilot Predator.
          
          This has been a long time coming, and while I could tell you all about it, I feel you'd enjoy it better if you went and gave the first chapter a read.
          
          As always, if you have any suggestions, let me know. Otherwise, enjoy.
          
          Ciao Long!

BloodStorm1319

@BaileyMarcumJasperso though, even of you read through all of Pilot Predator and TPPG, I'll have a few changes in mind I'd like to add to the current rewrite.
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