BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          	
          	Was disappointed in Chapter 1, so I adjusted it. Enjoy!
          	
          	Ciao Long!

BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          
          After... 2 and a half years... I finally finished that damn second chapter of Hollow Heart...
          
          Jesus Christ... Please go read it. SKIP THE FIRST CHAPTER OR AT LEAST THE LEMON PART.
          
          The second chapter is clean of NSFW, and I honestly made myself cry once or twice with what I cooked.
          
          This one is all about Sienna, the underappreciated best girl.
          
          Ciao Long...

BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          
          Consider this a "patch note" or something, but I adjusted the date in Chapters 4 & 5 from August 30th to August 25th, since the 30th was in the middle of the week and the 25th was a Monday— thus beginning the week of classes at Beacon.
          
          Ciao Long!
          
          (Hope you're enjoying the rewrite, if you're reading it.)

BloodStorm1319

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Howdy!
          
          Hey Readers, did you know that the Nevermore in Players and Pieces is 150 feet long?
          
          For reference, Monsterverse Godzilla is 300 feet tall.
          
          Now let's compare that to the Pilot's Titans.
          
          ~20 feet tall.
          
          What the fuck.
          
          Oh, and I spent a few hours running the math, they'd be roughly the weight of a fully-loaded 747.
          
          I'm... gonna think for a while on this one.
          
          Ciao Long...

BloodStorm1319

@JamaicanFootFungus That's genius enough I'll save it for later use. I didn't impliment it this chapter, due to the fact I feel like the Titans don't have the mobility necessary to do so. With Remnantian resources, perhaps they can upgrade a bit... 
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JamaicanFootFungus

Oh Lord Jesus… well, a Nevermore is far less technologically advanced than a Titan. Now what would be sick as hell to see is a scaled up version of how pilots can sort of “execute” a Titan by climbing up onto it and removing/destroying the power source (forgive any inaccuracies, I’ve never actually played Titanfall) but instead with the Titan climbing up onto the Nevermore to sort of “execute” it, if that makes sense.
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BloodStorm1319

Howdy!
          
          I've officially decided to make a discord server specifically for this book series. I'll announce the invite once I release Chapter 2 (still brainstorming at the moment), where I hope to see you all there. If you wish not to join, that's perfectly fine with me, but I'd love to interact with my readers.
          
          Ciao Long!

Its_Fr0st

@BloodStorm1319 doesn’t stop me if I go through with a rewrite
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BloodStorm1319

@Its_Fr0st You literally have #10 on the rankings for the ODST tag.
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Its_Fr0st

Now I wanna rewrite my story.
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BloodStorm1319

Howdy.
          
          Hello, one and all.
          
          I'd like to present;
          
          PURGE.
          
          The rewrite of Pilot Predator.
          
          This has been a long time coming, and while I could tell you all about it, I feel you'd enjoy it better if you went and gave the first chapter a read.
          
          As always, if you have any suggestions, let me know. Otherwise, enjoy.
          
          Ciao Long!

BloodStorm1319

@BaileyMarcumJasperso though, even of you read through all of Pilot Predator and TPPG, I'll have a few changes in mind I'd like to add to the current rewrite.
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