J_Henry

Dear Selina,
          
          I hope this message finds you well.
          
          I am currently writing a fantasy novel and am seeking feedback from readers who are experienced with the genre. At the moment, I have completed approximately one-third of the planned chapters and am considering new directions that would bring an even stronger sense of wonder and imagination to the story.
          
          I came across your thoughtful comments on Indigo Skies and noticed some parallels between your interests and my project, particularly in the way both works blend fantasy with the real world, though in very different ways. I also saw that you enjoy Harry Potter fanfiction, especially stories involving Draco, which suggests to me that you have a strong appreciation for character driven fantasy.
          
          Because of this, I thought you might be an ideal reader to share impressions and constructive feedback. If you would be open to it, I would be very grateful if you could read a few chapters of my story when you have the time. Your perspective as a seasoned reader would be invaluable as I continue developing the work.
          
          Thank you very much in advance for considering my request. I sincerely appreciate your time and any insights you may be willing to offer.
          
          With best regards
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390648570-she-of-the-blue-and-gold

BloodyMoonLovers

Should i be scared or honored that you found out so much about me - even though i have no story published nor have any followers?
            
            But its true, i do enjoy fantasy books - if its in the harry potter universe in sense of fanfiction or in general.
            
            And of course il read a few chapters when i get the time. I don't really have much to do anyways.
            
            But you may have seen from my comment under Indigo Skies, i am still a teenager and my own work im working on - and or my feedback on other works may be not as Descriptive or ... valuable as one of an adult, so i would advise that you not only seek my own thought and feedback, but rather others too.
            
            Sincerely, Selina <3
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