Blossom1982

Hey all I figure I channel my pain into art. I promise it won't be too triggering but it's real. Here is what I have in mind for my first Jaafar fanfiction. Please tell what you guys think? I would love to hear your feedback. Thank you in advance. Here is the blur story called a Broken Beautiful Soul. 
          	
          	A Beautiful Broken Soul
          	
          	A Jaafar Jackson Fanfiction
          	
          	Trigger Warnings: This story contains themes of depression, emotional trauma, verbal abuse, and mental health struggles. Reader discretion is advised.
          	
          	Lashay Davis is tired.
          	
          	Tired of fighting the darkness that follows her everywhere she goes. Tired of the cruel words that echo through her home. Tired of feeling invisible in a world that seems determined to remind her of every flaw she carries.
          	
          	Unemployed, struggling with depression, and trapped beneath years of emotional wounds, Lashay spends every day battling the voices in her mind that tell her she's not enough.
          	
          	Then she meets Jaafar Jackson.
          	
          	A kind-hearted college student with a gentle smile and a stubborn belief in seeing the best in people, Jaafar looks beyond Lashay's pain. Beyond her insecurities. Beyond the scars she tries so hard to hide.
          	
          	Where everyone else sees a broken woman, he sees a beautiful soul worth saving.
          	
          	When a life-changing encounter brings their worlds together, an unexpected friendship begins to blossom. As Jaafar helps Lashay confront the demons threatening to consume her, she must decide whether she can trust him—and herself—enough to believe that she deserves love, happiness, and a future.
          	
          	But can one person's faith be strong enough to silence years of depression and low esteem?
          	
          	Or will the darkness win before Lashay learns just how beautiful she truly is?
          	
          	"Sometimes the hardest person to save
          	
          	

Blossom1982

@Blossom1982 true I don't want to be the other woman. So I leave her out lol no disrespect to Mads 
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nvrland

@Blossom1982 it’s honestly totally up to you! I put her in mine, but I changed her name, but she still plays the same role as she is in Jaafar’s life now. I would say you you don’t want to be “the other woman” in the story, I would keep her out. But if you want that type of drama, I would add her in.
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Blossom1982

@nvrland @2takemyloveaway So I have another question for you both? Do you think Maddie should make an appearance in this story and what role would you like her to play in it?  
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Blossom1982

Hey all I figure I channel my pain into art. I promise it won't be too triggering but it's real. Here is what I have in mind for my first Jaafar fanfiction. Please tell what you guys think? I would love to hear your feedback. Thank you in advance. Here is the blur story called a Broken Beautiful Soul. 
          
          A Beautiful Broken Soul
          
          A Jaafar Jackson Fanfiction
          
          Trigger Warnings: This story contains themes of depression, emotional trauma, verbal abuse, and mental health struggles. Reader discretion is advised.
          
          Lashay Davis is tired.
          
          Tired of fighting the darkness that follows her everywhere she goes. Tired of the cruel words that echo through her home. Tired of feeling invisible in a world that seems determined to remind her of every flaw she carries.
          
          Unemployed, struggling with depression, and trapped beneath years of emotional wounds, Lashay spends every day battling the voices in her mind that tell her she's not enough.
          
          Then she meets Jaafar Jackson.
          
          A kind-hearted college student with a gentle smile and a stubborn belief in seeing the best in people, Jaafar looks beyond Lashay's pain. Beyond her insecurities. Beyond the scars she tries so hard to hide.
          
          Where everyone else sees a broken woman, he sees a beautiful soul worth saving.
          
          When a life-changing encounter brings their worlds together, an unexpected friendship begins to blossom. As Jaafar helps Lashay confront the demons threatening to consume her, she must decide whether she can trust him—and herself—enough to believe that she deserves love, happiness, and a future.
          
          But can one person's faith be strong enough to silence years of depression and low esteem?
          
          Or will the darkness win before Lashay learns just how beautiful she truly is?
          
          "Sometimes the hardest person to save
          
          

Blossom1982

@Blossom1982 true I don't want to be the other woman. So I leave her out lol no disrespect to Mads 
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nvrland

@Blossom1982 it’s honestly totally up to you! I put her in mine, but I changed her name, but she still plays the same role as she is in Jaafar’s life now. I would say you you don’t want to be “the other woman” in the story, I would keep her out. But if you want that type of drama, I would add her in.
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Blossom1982

@nvrland @2takemyloveaway So I have another question for you both? Do you think Maddie should make an appearance in this story and what role would you like her to play in it?  
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Blossom1982

Stepping back from things that drains me. Because people don't care they are only for themselves so I am choosing myself. I won't be reading anything in here  I am leaving 

Blossom1982

@2takemyloveaway yes I totally agree Jaafar does seem like a beautiful person and has the same kind  hearted personality as his uncle Michael. This is why I love Jaafar and will write fanfiction on him. I am his fan for life. I hope he acts in more movies after Michael.  This man is too beautiful on the inside and outside. Man he has really inspired and reignited my passion for writing. I never the motivation to write anything due to my depression but now I am more inspired to now. Hopefully my Jaafar stories will inspire others to keep writing on this beautiful man. 
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2takemyloveaway

@Blossom1982 I think Jaafar would tell them that their life has value, even if they can't see it right now. He'd probably encourage them to keep going, reach out to someone they trust, and remember that difficult moments don't last forever. He seems like the type of person who would want his fans to know they're not alone and that asking for help is a sign of strength, not weakness!
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Blossom1982

@Blossom1982 I wonder what would Jaafar say to a fan who is considering suicide 
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-dylansvitar

Heyyy girl! Thank you so much for the support

Blossom1982

@-dylansvitar so how long have you been writing 
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Blossom1982

@-dylansvitar wow you're so young to write such a story. I thought you were older than that.  
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-dylansvitar

@Blossom1982 I'm 16 and you're fine dw
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