Blue17

So the end of Kairi and Erik is up sniff sniff. :( Let me know what you think! I hope you like!

I-Got-The-Tea

@Blue17 Loved it! Really wish you would have made a sequel because I binge read it and it was over entirely too fast!
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stargazer0966

Hey! Do you mind checking out my new story My Suicidal Friday? I'd love some feedback! :D Thank you! 
          
          Amberlin's parents are always fighting. Every time they are, she runs away, trying to find that safe haven that we all have.
          
          But as she does, she meets him...Colton. She falls for him, hard. But she can't help herself. It's odd how he sort of plays with her mind, and how she trusts his family so easily, so quickly. Too quickly to be real. 
          
          Something is definitely different about Colton. And she really notices it, when he burns her when many people are around and that he's cold when it's just the two of them. She can't seem to stop falling for him, no matter how unrealistic it or he is. 
          
          But it's not all fun and games. Especially when she goes back to her mom, and she gets kicked out. Then news about her dad leaves her heart broken, even if Colton is there. 
          
          Every time her mom and her try to make up, something gets in the way, and nothing is sane any more. Even if she realizes that she doesn't live in the real world anymore. She lives in Colton's...
          
          ~Ash~

MsTruter

Hi there 
          
          Could you please check out my story HUNT FOR THE NEWBORN and comment and vote. I really need some outside perspective on this and your judgement would be highly appreciated. I would also read your story and comment and vote if you want me to. Just drop me a message and I will be glad to do that. 
          
          Also another thing. There is a story on Sally's profile CAUGHT UP IN A PROPOSTEROUS LOVE TRIANGLE. They have uploaded one part and said that they will only upload more if the people seem interested. Can you please go and read that story as well and comment and vote. I am really curious to see what happens in that story. Here is the link: http://www.wattpad.com/306245-caught-up-in-a-preposterous-love-triangle 
          
          Thank you so much in advance. 
          
          Lots of Love 
          
          MsTruter 
          
          

Sweets_I_Eat

heya! If you don’t mind, could you take a look at "the four sisters" on my profile page? My sister (her account is Angii121) and I are writing it and I would love to get some honest feedback! It would be really awesome if you could, but no pressure! 
          
          Thanks a bunch, 
          
          Storm xx
          

wendyandpeterpan

hey (: 
          i'm sorry to bother you, but i was wondering if you could read 
          my story Medony? ;D 
          it's not good or anything, thats why i need feedback, (: 
          wellll, if you have time that would be amazing<3 
          but i understand if not <3 
          wellll ; take care (:

BelieveInMe

Hi there! My names Amanda, and i recently uploaded 2 new stories to my profile. One called *Miya*, and the other *Little-Miss-Masquerade*. Miya is more on the older, supernatural side of things, where as Little-Miss is more teenaged drama ;) 
          I was wondering if maybe you would have an interest in reading either of these. I really enjoy and get motivated by comments and votes, especially fans! :D 
          I would really appreciate it if you would read them! 
          Thanks, 
          Amanda