BlueAnxiousButterfly

I tried writing in a male POV again but I'm not sure how well I'm doing with it. I don't think I portray the masculine vibe well. What do you think?

Spiritsx

Im posting here because messages can sometimes be lost in a stream of old and new ones :3 
          
          
          Heyyy Gloria!!! Guess what :) I finished ur novel and my favorite chapter was by far the most recent one you've posted with the party setting also I love Raven she is like THE BEST POINT OF VIEW CHARACTER I've read in so long and personally I identify w her so well and love her name. This novel was a refreshing and fun read for me especially by Wattpads usual standards I never found myself bored or like it was too slow. You wrote it amazing!!! Also if you update more chapters of it let me know and also I inboxed u.  c:
          
          

BlueAnxiousButterfly

Thank you so much for this review✨
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diamondandsapphire

Hey , 
          I am interested in r4r , v4v and c4c . 
          Honestly i really need feedback on my writing as this is my first crack at writing.  Which story do you  want me to read for you . 

Spiritsx

@diamondandsapphire interested in vote for vote please , r4r in a few weeks perhaps bcz I'm full on those right now
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BlueAnxiousButterfly