BlueArrow_26

Hey everyone!
          	
          	I hope your 2018 kicked off with a great start. All of the best for the year ahead xoxo.
          	
          	I have just released Chapter 13 of Letting Him In. The story starts delving into the Mystery/Thriller element. 
          	
          	Tell me what you think of it. As always, kindly vote, comment and share
          	
          	Lots of love and well wishes :)

BlueArrow_26

@BlueArrow_26 Enjoy !
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Nochtandriel

@BlueArrow_26  Oooooooooooh lawdy! I smell fun
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BlueArrow_26

Hey everyone!
          
          I hope your 2018 kicked off with a great start. All of the best for the year ahead xoxo.
          
          I have just released Chapter 13 of Letting Him In. The story starts delving into the Mystery/Thriller element. 
          
          Tell me what you think of it. As always, kindly vote, comment and share
          
          Lots of love and well wishes :)

BlueArrow_26

@BlueArrow_26 Enjoy !
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Nochtandriel

@BlueArrow_26  Oooooooooooh lawdy! I smell fun
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LaNoirDu

I NEED MORE!!!!! Please update Letting Him In. I MUST KNOW: who, what, when, where and why....please

BlueArrow_26

@LaNoirDu latest chapter is out whoop whoop  go and read it
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BlueArrow_26

Hey Hoomans !
          
          Hope y'all doing well. So I have just released a sneak peek of the sequel to The Dentist's Revenge, in both stories of mine. So kindly take a moment to read over the first chapter and let me know what you think of it. 
          Also, I still don't have a title for it, so comment any suggestions you might have.
          
          Lots of love and well wishes :)
          -BlueArrow_26

indie_wanderer

Soz, that I had to post this here, but my comment wouldn't post in the comment section (sigh)
          
          Uuuuuuuuhhhhh *climbs into trashcan and cries for three years*
          
          Tbh, I would like to say Derek and Rahul because Derek has kinda always been cute and kind and Rahul seems to really like him. Derek's also ultra hot and that's a plus, however, I feel that he's too innocent and nice. I still ship Rahul and Peter way more because they had a good history and Peter seemed really driven to get Rahul, at the beginning. Peter, to me, is also a lot more of a wholesome character (wow that makes him sound like bread), but I mean it in that we've come to know a lot more about who he is and where he comes from. Tbh, Derek is shrouded in a certain degree of mystery, and that is enticing, but makes him a character that I don't completely trust with Rahul. Ya, I know Peter cheated on Rahul, and I don't condone cheating, but they were university sweethearts. And that's at least worth an extra 50 ship points. 
          
          In terms of Rahul's attitude to them, I feel that Derek got it easier than Peter. Peter really had to work to get Rahul's jelly and that made me like him quite a lot, the fact that he was so devoted. Derek had it easy and that makes his relationship with Rahul volatile because it was built very quickly and can crumble very quickly. I still think that Rahul loves Peter despite how much it hurts him to love him. I really like Derek, I do. He's the equivalent of chocolate.  Derek is hot, adorable and kind but he has no flaws. Peter has tons of flaws and it makes me hate him and love him, because on one side we know he loves Rahul and on the other side we hate him because he cheated on Rahul despite loving him. 
          
          On to Rahul/Derek-dynamic: They work great together. They're cute as hell and still feisty and they basically mimic the Peter/Rahul-dynamic minus the passion. 
          
          I love both ships, I do, but I like Peter/Rahul a smidge more than Derek/Rahul.

BlueArrow_26

@indie_wanderer OMG thanks for replying to this ! Sorry that i am only seeing this now.
            
            lol, That bread comment tho :')
            
            Firstly, you have raised some rather good points and your analysis is amazing, i have to acknowledge that. However, now i feel like the whole Derek/Rahul relationship is flimsy to say the say least. I know i havent given much insight to Derek and thats why chapter 11 delves into his psyche. Hopefully you'll understand him more.
            
            As for Peter/Rahul, i didnt expect such an overwhelming response to them. I aimed to focus and build the Derek/Rahul dynamic more, looks like im not doing such a good job with regards to that. 
            
            bleh, its making me question my entire story line now.
            
            But thank you so much for your thoughts and opinions, it truly helps motivates me to continue this story @indie_wanderer I really value your opinion. All of the best for the new year friend :)
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BlueArrow_26

Hey Precious Hoomans
          
          I know I've been MIA for a while, but all for a very good reason (explained in the latest chapter of Letting Him In)
          So, kindly go read it at your earliest convenience, Chapter 10. Remember to vote and comment. I look forward to your guys' comments. It really makes my day.
          
          Good luck to those writing finals. All of the best!
          
          Hope you all are well
          
          Lots of love and well wishes
          -BlueArrow_26

BlueArrow_26

Hey hoomans
          
          I hope this message finds you all well. I have just updated Letting Him In. Kindly read it at your earliest convenience. Preferably now. Lol. Kidding. But do read it and kindly vote and leave your thoughts about it.
          
          Quick gushing moment, The Dentist's Revenge has reached 1K views!!!! Holy freaking amazeballs!!!! I can't believe it has received such love. Thank you guys !!! I really appreciate it. OMG. I think I'm going to go hyperventilate in a corner now.
          KThanksBye
          
          Lots of love and well wishes :-)