BlueAlastor
I decides to read both variants of your story. First one I love so far, added into library of mine.
Maybe will add even Rewrite version
Wish you good luck
P.S. mo matter, if there are bugs(lots of them), I still love Chapter 4 and waiting for Chapter 5
BlueDev0421
Chapter 4 really did a good job in impressing me. I already have some ideas for some twists when it comes to writing this chapter, changing some events and whatnot, especially for the Joy Joy Gang. And thanks for the luck!