Shelley2594

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

redrose333

hey i read your story and i think it is awesome. it's something new and i think you should keep writing.
          i was wondering if you can read my story: i'm dating a star. i hope you like it and if you can vote, comment and become a fan.
          o and keep writing!!!!

wendyandpeterpan

helllo there :) 
          i was just wandering if you could 
          check out one of my stories? 
          the first one is callled, 'Medony' 
          && its about a girl who has to choose 
          between a totally hot jerk + a sweet 
          mysterious guy (;< 
          the other is called, 'i want you to want me ' 
          && its about a girl who recently gets out of coma 
          + meets a totally hot bad ass ;; (: 
          <3 i hope you give them a go, 
          but if you don't want to or don't have time 
          don't fret, because i COMPLETELY understand (: 
          thanks for reading this message, :) 
          take care! 
          wendyandpeterpan (:

yulovemeonly

Heyy
          sorry to bother you, but i wondered if you can spare some minutes and read my 7 chapters so far story "Give My Virginity Back"
          comment (on every chapter), give feedback, vote and become a fan (only fans recieve updates)
          thank you
          yulovemeonly
          Thushara (:
          ps. if you want me to read someting....feel free to tell me...i love requests...i try to get to everyone

Damonh

hi!
          I'm Yna and i'm currently writing "Dangerous Prince: The Choice"... i hope you have free time to read it... please leave a comment there (I just want to know what you think about it... and if you liked it) or vote or become a fan...
          here are some of the lines from my story...
          
          "But I have said before that i don't like you!" Urgh! The last thing I needed now was a stalker!
          
          "I don't care," she said stubbornly. "I won't give up. I know you'll fall for me in the end."
          
          "What the -" She smiled when she saw the reaction on my face. "I. Will. Never. Fall. For. You."
          
          Analee's smile grew wider. "I can always make you love me."
          
          "What?" I shouted.
          
          She bit her lower lip again, her eyes gleaming with anticipation.
          
          "You are a pathetic little bitch," I said through gritted teeth. Was this demon making fun of me? Was this some kind of a joke for her?
          
          She walked gracefully towards me and before i could even move a muscle, she tip - toed and kissed me on the lips.
          
          Damn! She stole my first kiss! The nerve of this girl!
          
          She moved her face an inch away from me and whispered huskily, "Well, I am the bitch who will make sure that one day you'll kneel before me begging for my affection."
          
          thanks! ^_^