I have one general comment regarding Rescuing the Player book. One thing I dont lkke is comment from early chapters that main character has brest implants.
In set up and story telling after her brother was arested she didnt really have much money, had to.work hard, and also being molested as young lerson, it doesnt fit into her progile to do breast surgery and enhance her sexual look. Usually molsted women are less likelly to go that path, plus her charavter doesnt seem one to want to go that way.
Just observation and reading some of testemonies of molested women it seems really unlikelly and a bit strange. It would be better story to not have that insignificant detail.