BlueSwan

Hi guys I’ve just posted the first chapter of different the rewritten version. Please tell me your opinions and what you would like to see to happen as I’m thinking of adding in things to make it more exciting to read. As this was written like nearly 4? Years ago now XD anyways I’d love to be able to know your feed back. 
          
          Thank you 

Hi guys,
          
          So I’ve had so much spare time on my hands recently and I’ve been stuck on what to do. However I’ve been reading over my old works. Especially “different” and I’ve noticed a lot of mistakes and things I could add to change it up? And maybe I could even change a few things to see a different out come and maybe turn it into a book where there would be sequels. I could also go into a little more detail while writing as I’ve realised (this is an old work) that I write a short piece then move to the next paragraph. So I thought I’ll give it a re write and see this out come. 
          
          How do you guys feel about that? Let me know your input and if you guys would like to see a re write where there should be weekly chapters posted. :)
          
          Thank you for your time x

Sweetie, you are a talented but underrated writer.
          
          You hear me.