BlueVelvet

Pleas read my story and tell me what you think be honest!!! If you think it terrible tell me some writing tip to make my story better. Here the link: 
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/2002893-fantasy

@DarknessAndLight HI!! I Sold Myself to the Devil is so awesome.. I'm so in love with Blake<3 plus, my name's Lexi too:) ayieeee, :"> 

Hi! :)
          
          I just wanted to thank you for becoming a fan! It really means a lot to me and it's super appreciated! :P