GoodLuc
I've reread your epic story. The only critical thing I want to say is the following: you should have added more personal nightmarish moments. Mind you, I don't think that millions are statistic, just that they give more emotional impact. And yet, I like your story very much. Just one more question. Did 11th Doctor die on Trenzalore in your canon or it didn't happen? Sincerely yours, Ilya Rysenkov.
BlueWhaleKing
Thank you! (Sorry I haven't been on here for a long time) Yeah my story has problems, I hope to rewrite it someday. As for Trenzalore, I haven't really thought that far. I like to think he doesn't, but the Time of the Doctor is so riddled with holes that I don't even know how to approach it...
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Balas