Hello, it's Izzy! I've just read your first chapter of your book, and I'm here to respond back with your review. I will be honest, I promise. I love the plot and the storyline, everyone needs a good romance book in their life! But there are just some minor tweaks. I've noticed multiple grammar errors, I'm no expert, but I do know a couple things! I believe if you space your paragraphs, it will make the more sense to the reader. I don't know if it's just me or not. I can't think of anymore right now, but I will give you some advice. I've been down the billionaire book road, and let's just say it's not pretty when people comment it's too cliche. So, I know I haven't read the rest, but in the future try to avoid as much as the cliche writing as possible! ;)
