Blue_Lightning41

Also a quick question... would you guys rather keep the original Brown Eyes (retitle it) the same and me start a whole new book. Or do it all over on the same book? I can do it either way. 

Important Update:
          
          Okay guys... I’ve been seriously thinking about this for over a month now and I think that it would be best for Brown Eyes, it’s story, and community that I rewrote it to make it better. Don’t worry all the main events will mostly stay the same. I’m also adding more story lines to it to make the events not seem like that they happened one after another. I will start this project starting tomorrow or the next day. Keep this in mind that this will allow me to update more chapters more frequently and there won’t be any little in between chapters like barley even worth reading. I also may update some of the characters designs like I have been doing but this time I will also up grade the story as well. I’m sorry for the lack of updates and I will continue to try to make Brown Eyes a very enjoyable story. Anyway that’s kinda part of my New Years revolutions so I’ll do it.  Anyway new art will be coming and so will be new and improved story lines. Anyway it has been fun with you guys but I think it is time for an update! 

Hiya! I read Brown Eyes. Its been good so far. Its dramatic and kinda cute. I also like your art style. It looks great! Better then my drawings.
          
           Anyways.. I don't really know how to give advice... But I don't think you need to change much.  I haven't finished the book yet,  I'm busy with school and graduation.. Besides I'll be reading your other book (Ice Composer right?) in a bit. 
          
          Sorry if I suck at giving feedback.