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Blue_Parabatai
Aug 31, 2013 07:59AM
We have edited and made some changes to the first chapter of Gunpowder.Take a look at it and tell us what you think :DView all Conversations
Story by Blue.Parabatai
Gunpowder.
It all started in china, where gunpowder was first created.
"These days like everything else, yo...