Fatima_ekleen
Can you write a novel about Abhir and Kiara
Blue___writes
Blue___writes
Hey, Wattpad fam! If you're looking for a story that’ll keep you hooked, make you feel all the emotions, and leave you wanting more, this is it! Check it out now and let me know what you think!
** TROPES**
- Grumpy x Sunshine
- Age gap
- Family Drama
- Misunderstanding
- Possessive hero
- Touch her/him and die
- Strong female lead
- RajasthaniXBengali
https://www.wattpad.com/story/374591055
Fatima_ekleen
Can you write a novel? Ekleen Akam and Harleen from the series Udaariyaan, you could write a novel about them
Blue___writes
New chapter is out. I hope everyone will like it. Please share your views....
I just published "CHAPTER - 31" of my story "Vengeful Hearts". https://www.wattpad.com/1508457570?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Blue___writes
vsadh067
Hey author
Please update
Santiyao5689
Let's grow together
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fahi_storytale7790
Hello guys
Please give my book a chance
If you don't like it you can skip it
https://www.wattpad.com/story/385905911?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=fahi_storytale7790
vsadh067
Hey Author
Like I said in my previous message
Interesting story but very confusing...
Is it a sequel or something?
Your cover story states one thing and prologue another and it's confusing...what revenge...why is he so angry with Arohi? Why was he unnecessarily taunting Arohi when he was getting married to Akshara?
Blue___writes
@vsadh067 Thank you for sharing your detailed feedback! I truly appreciate the time and effort you’ve put into analyzing the story and pointing out areas that could use more clarity. I’ll revisit the chapters to smooth out the transitions and provide better explanations and will make sure to address the points you've highlighted with greater clarity. Thank you once again for your valuable insights—I hope you’ll continue to read and share your thoughts as the story progresses!
vsadh067
@Blue___writes I don't want to intrude but if you are writing from continuation of a TV serial then it will confuse authors who haven’t seen the series But if you are writing from getting inspiration then I would suggest you to clarify the plot .. Your cover says he loved Akshara but when she refused he proposed Arohi...but then Akshara declared her love and he decided to marry Akshara... But the prologue starts with haldi of Akshara and Abhi.. Now for the readers who haven't seen the series the un connected parts that create doubts Where is the part where Arohi is left at the altar? How come her and his parents are comfortable him jumping between brides on his own? He is clear on who he loves and Akshu loves him back and is marrying her...then unless he is. a mental case why is he insulting and taunting Arohi ...who is just doing her work? His is welcoming and all to Arohi then why she says she was wrong to Abhi about always supporting Akshara when she never once insulted Arohi? You will have incorporate a convincing part in the story to give a better understandable of your cover story and the prologue. . Else though your story is interesting it will it loose it's hold on readers for it's confusing plot...
vsadh067
Hello
I came across your book vengeful hearts today ...Interesting story..please update soon
Blue___writes
@vsadh067 Hello @vsadh067 Thank you so much for checking out Vengeful Hearts and sharing your thoughts! I’m glad you found the story interesting. Your support means a lot to me! I’ll be updating soon, so stay tuned—there’s a lot more to come in Aarohi and Abhimanyu’s journey. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts on the upcoming chapters!
Rohitash3
Happy new year