Hyasintthus28

I sure will give you heads up when I’m done and ready to post it on here. Well I’ve always loved Greek Mythology. I always loved the story of Hyacinthus and Apollo. So I just wanted to take that story further and ad to it. It was such a short story but not much about Hyacinthus background so I added to it.

Hyasintthus28

Well let me tell you what I’m naming the series of my books. The title is the Children of Chaos: the Hyacinthus chronicles. I’ve always loved Greek myth and there were never, any much story’s about the Primordial Gods . It’s my own take of them and Hyacinthus. I’m making him a Demi God. His mother is The Goddess Hecate and his father is a Mortal King. I know Hecate is a Titaness but I’m changing her parents to Nyx and Erubos the primordial Gods of Night and Darkness. Making her a Primordial goddess of Witchcraft and the Crossroads. Her love for the mortal king was kept secret from the Olympian Gods. As well as  the Birth of her son Hyacinthus. Of course we will have Hyacinthus first love The God Apollo and the the God of the West Wind  who rapes him and kills him and not being punished like he should have been. I can keep going but I want to keep some things till I’m done with book 1 then I might post a few chapters on here to see if people will read and like it.

Bluebaebae

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@ Hyasintthus28  Finally had the time to sit down and send you some thoughts. How interesting that you choose to let your story combine mythology and subjects that are very up to date like toxic relations/rape etc. Seems to be a complicated but yet touching story. I'm an omnivore when it comes to reading and finds pleasure to read abou a lot of different subjects. For me the story and it's characters must have depth (that's one reason why I don't often like fan fictions by amateurs). I think it's important to build up a good background story. Even if everything isn't told to the reader, the author should know where his characters comes from and why they acts as they do. Or we end up with an Yuan Zong whos character totally modified to something really toxic (but people seems to think it's ok to rape, humiliate and be mean to a person as long as you loves him so who am I to complain). From your comment I got the feeling that you have build up the world around your hero well. And as said, it's very intresting that you borrow some background from greek mythology. Shout out to me when you post your literary work here on wp. Would be interesting to read it. Good luck with your writing!
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omg340savitor

I am addicted to their addiction...I am going all the way with them...till the end..

Bluebaebae

@omg340savitor I love the serie. The actors are made for this story. So sad they couldn't make the second season or even finish the first one.
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omg340savitor

@omg340savitor I know... up today I was saying soo...while listening to a song from one of their videos on youtube.
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Bluebaebae

@omg340savitor The same. I'm totally in love with this guys and their story. One of the best books I've ever read.
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