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@ Hyasintthus28 Finally had the time to sit down and send you some thoughts. How interesting that you choose to let your story combine mythology and subjects that are very up to date like toxic relations/rape etc. Seems to be a complicated but yet touching story. I'm an omnivore when it comes to reading and finds pleasure to read abou a lot of different subjects. For me the story and it's characters must have depth (that's one reason why I don't often like fan fictions by amateurs). I think it's important to build up a good background story. Even if everything isn't told to the reader, the author should know where his characters comes from and why they acts as they do. Or we end up with an Yuan Zong whos character totally modified to something really toxic (but people seems to think it's ok to rape, humiliate and be mean to a person as long as you loves him so who am I to complain). From your comment I got the feeling that you have build up the world around your hero well. And as said, it's very intresting that you borrow some background from greek mythology. Shout out to me when you post your literary work here on wp. Would be interesting to read it. Good luck with your writing!