Blursonyn
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Well, things have been complicate for me all of these months,society really plays by its own rules... The best of all is,I at least used the long odissey to know myself better and fix the past while also planning the future. And out of the little reading I've done on the past months I would like to recommend a story from Wattpad direct rival Webnovels,which I really enjoyed. A little of madness recommending Coca-Cola on Pepsi official page but well... The story mix's the historical Yellow Turban Rebellion,the biggest rebellion in ancient China,with a system(not quite similar to the Gamer if any of you are thinking) the name of the fic "Battle Royale of the sinners" doesn't hide anything... Reincarnations, political drama and even true love! If my description has make you curious enough... Here I leave a link plus a trailer from Total War that fits like a glove,little story about the rebellion so you don't walk there naked! https://m.webnovel.com/book/11861919805576805 https://youtu.be/woEGXcvNe98 https://youtu.be/t2LodmmBQ9g Learning history with Blursonyn,hey...
Zzz-Awakening
Yo Blursonyn let me know when you’re back on. I’ll make some more Pk Legacy chapters when you’re back on. Also I got a Team Rocket edition storyline just for ya pal, lol.
Mukuro7
Welcome back my dude, anyway I’ve made some updates if you wish to check them out.
Mukuro7
True that...I’ll give them a year. They did do the same thing with Yu Gi Oh after all.
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Blursonyn
Well, things have been complicate for me all of these months,society really plays by its own rules... The best of all is,I at least used the long odissey to know myself better and fix the past while also planning the future. And out of the little reading I've done on the past months I would like to recommend a story from Wattpad direct rival Webnovels,which I really enjoyed. A little of madness recommending Coca-Cola on Pepsi official page but well... The story mix's the historical Yellow Turban Rebellion,the biggest rebellion in ancient China,with a system(not quite similar to the Gamer if any of you are thinking) the name of the fic "Battle Royale of the sinners" doesn't hide anything... Reincarnations, political drama and even true love! If my description has make you curious enough... Here I leave a link plus a trailer from Total War that fits like a glove,little story about the rebellion so you don't walk there naked! https://m.webnovel.com/book/11861919805576805 https://youtu.be/woEGXcvNe98 https://youtu.be/t2LodmmBQ9g Learning history with Blursonyn,hey...
Mecha_Fenix
I miss you dude! Hope you had a great time at christmas and new year! :3
Blursonyn
@Mecha_Fenix Troubling matter indeed... Damn the higher ups of the page, keeping the information all to themselves!
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Mecha_Fenix
@Blursonyn All I'm doing is write, I have like no idea of what that corruptive change is xD But is good to see you again!
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Blursonyn
@Mecha_Fenix And happy April to you mate! Being honest do not like the changes that Wattpad has suffered so far,paid stories will make the site quite similar to webnovels. Hope all of you guys don't become greedy and fall for it!
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Zzz-Awakening
You’re still alive bro? lol
Zzz-Awakening
@Blursonyn lol yeah don’t have your friends worry like that I really got sad for a moment.
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Blursonyn
@Zzz-Awakening Yeah silly little me,internet is a world of contrast and humans are creatures of habit. One cannot forget friends even if they are on the red!
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Tinytoast1
Your comments have always been a big part of my writing process and you're insightful words have helped me multiple times in the past so I ask that you please help me now. I'm close to posting Naruto but it is such a large anime with such a huge following that it will be my greatest undertaking if it is successful. So I would like to get your advice on some things. I'm taking your idea of starting in the Village Hidden in The Clouds and I'm still working on other details. As for the character, I'm thinking of either making him in his early 20's or around the ages of the sensei's present. My only problem is this is quite the age difference if I want to include characters like Sakura and Ino. The characters fighting style I decided to base off of a magician rather than a shinobi to change it up. You know, a master of illusion and genjutsu rather than stealth and taijutsu. If you could help me out you would certainly be given full credit and you'll have my thanks.
Blursonyn
@Tinytoast1 *and cause a certain chain of events needs to meet all the clan's heads of Konohagakure,with that pretext our character walks and enters the Flower Shop asking for directions and then meets the Yamanakas one of the families. Lots of pretexts could be given,for a character such as Sakura perphaps meeting the girl and her mother eating ramen at Ramen Ichiraku. Still all the meetings I have in mind do despict the character's as children since we look at them from a foreigner's and adult's perspective. My cards are on the table still Writer you should consider making the MC a bit younger if you want to give relevance and not lose character development for people the readers may feel more familiarise with. Not only speaking about Konoha the only chance of interacting with Kumo's Genin(Samui,Tarui,Ran,Darui,Karui) is for Y/N's being a teacher on Kumo's Academy and train them as sensei. As bad as it sounds from a narrative perspective that could also give the Y/N The opportunity of meeting lots of younger ninja,being seen as a mentor figure they could look up to. Ummm starting as an adult really changes the storytelling,no formation,no innocence shattered,no first experiences on relations and hardships. That is without a doubt one of the pillars of the series yet sometimes breaking tradition is the way to success... So far so good,those are my impression on possibilities and scenarios our MC could be in to meet the requirements,see if something is useful and well here I'll be.
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Blursonyn
@Tinytoast1 Well for a start the age difference will be a huge boundary between our MC and the girls mentioned. Remember that on the Ninja Villages a Genin is already a legal adult,a child soldier that the state supports. So making our protagonist younger is always an option that could help you build bonds with the Canon characters since they could meet on Chunin exams or something like that... A 20 years old guy would be more likely to interact with characters like Kurenai,Mabui(the Raikage's secretary),Tsunade...and so on. I don't what could be the rank our character has on society not that if he is even a ninja but if he is at least the man would be a Chunin from my perspective (even the most incompetent ninjas reach it). The only chance I see is that our MC is sent to Konoha as a diplomat during the plot and gets the chance to interact(from a foreigner's perspective) with the kids of Naruto's generation in Konoha. Such an event of course cannot happen at the start of the series cause you'll have to do worldbuilding for Kumo and its citizens yet with a few chapters you could introduce the concept. Making our MC a stray ninja(a deserter to Kumo) after a certain event could be a possibility,either a disagreement with the elites over a mission of backing a noble over another in a council of the Land of Lightning if he indeed has some status. Perphaps a messenger?Remembering a certain fic about Fire Emblem,on which the MC travelled a lot building lots of relations in the process. Being a neutral ninja(originating from a village such as Takigakure,whose ninjas could be forced to serve another villages in order for them not to attack their peaceful nation,a Switzerland of sorts). And our character could be one of the few trusted to carry said information. The idea of "Starting on Kumo" doesn't mean we have to be a native of the land. On any of the possibilities the meetings could be casual our character is living in Konoha due to his position *Continues
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Tinytoast1
I thank you for all of your comments and statements about Samurai Champloo and you were quite spot on for quite a few things. I did learn that the story itself has a warped timeline thus many historical events happen despite being hundreds of years apart. An I'll just inform you, but our character was a ronin at the Siege of Osaka. It is quite an interesting battle and I thought it would be perfect for our characters injuries and backstory.
Blursonyn
@Tinytoast1 So SXVIII Japan heavily inspired on SXVII Japan then? I knew was there on the tracks,little mentions to the fall of the Ryukyu Kingdom specially when exploring Mugen's storyline won't be a bad addition to the plot. Glad I could contribute a little on your writing and story building in general,The end of the Toyotomi Clan's and the infamous Oda Clan fall from power(let's not forget about the extinction Chōsokabe Clan) will really be a sore point to the memory of our character. Perphaps he was in love with a female member of one of this clans?We shall see...We shall see. When the Tokugawa wants vengeance it will not stop.
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Tinytoast1
Hello again! I was coming to ask if you would like to read the first chapter of Samurai Champloo. You give detailed observations and I would like to see what I did well and what could change
Blursonyn
@Tinytoast1 Sorry for not answering before mate! Really troubling days on the university with no stop work here and there all ending with more hassle to handle right back home. Read it today,given a few comments,the story has a good concept and a story period that really catches !y interest,even posted a theory about the possible timeline of Samurai Champloo as a series in general! No worries when time permits me,I will read the major part of the content you post. That being said no RWBY,Digimon or that stuff...
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Blursonyn
Those of us who have Celtic and Nordic heritage can only feel proud when hearing this ancient song... You'll blood will boil and your heart melt when you remember that there is more than the actual corruption and scandals on the mystic path of the old ways... Mix - Yggdrasill - Viking Pagan Folk Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BPILaMT50k&list=RD2BPILaMT50k