BlvckHalyz

Hi everyone!
          	As I mentioned in my previous post, I’ve revisited some passages of Under the Surface.
          	The story hasn’t undergone major changes, as the revision mainly focused on flow and vocabulary, but I did make some SIGNIFICANT  EDITS to the first chapter—especially in the scene between Grace and Luke.
          	It didn’t feel mature enough, and it wasn’t very clear why Grace reacts the way she does toward Luke.
          	Now, I’ve finally reached a version I’m happy with, one that aligns with the rest of the story.
          	
          	Let me know what you think! As always, your comments and feedback are more than welcome.
          	
          	Thank you all! 
          	
          	Halyz

CyndiMatt

Hey. Your book is great. Were you able to get to mine?

CyndiMatt

https://www.wattpad.com/story/378311817?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=CyndiMatt (this is my journal)
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BlvckHalyz

@CyndiMatt hey! Great prologue! Can’t wait for the first chapter :)
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BlvckHalyz

Reading it in a couple of hours. Getting back to you soon! :)
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BlvckHalyz

Hi everyone!
          As I mentioned in my previous post, I’ve revisited some passages of Under the Surface.
          The story hasn’t undergone major changes, as the revision mainly focused on flow and vocabulary, but I did make some SIGNIFICANT  EDITS to the first chapter—especially in the scene between Grace and Luke.
          It didn’t feel mature enough, and it wasn’t very clear why Grace reacts the way she does toward Luke.
          Now, I’ve finally reached a version I’m happy with, one that aligns with the rest of the story.
          
          Let me know what you think! As always, your comments and feedback are more than welcome.
          
          Thank you all! 
          
          Halyz

authormione

Hey Girlypop!
          
          This is Mione—sorry to interrupt your message box, but I come bearing chaos and romance! Let me introduce you to Entangled Hearts—a high school romance packed with drama, banter, and just the right amount of emotional damage.
          
          We’ve got three couples (yes, THREE—because one love story is never enough). The main couple? Oh, they are peak enemies-to-lovers energy. They bicker, they scheme, they swear they hate each other—but we all know they’re hopelessly in love. It’s messy, it’s dramatic, and you’ll be obsessed.
          
          If you love sassy comebacks, heart-fluttering moments, and chaotic love stories that will live rent-free in your head, then this book is your next addiction.
          
          And while you’re at it, hit that follow button—because I promise, I bring more drama than a high school hallway!
          
          Do vote and comment once you give it a try! 
          
          Love, 
          Mione

_Just_Call_Me_Alex_

Hi! Thank you so much for checking out my book! I hope you like it and continue to read as the story unfolds. I'm juggling several different reads at the moment, but I'm going to add your book to my reading list! :)

BlvckHalyz

Hey, thanks for adding my book! Can’t wait to hear what you think about it!
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BlvckHalyz

Hey y’all! Just had a little “life crisis” today and decided to tweak some chapters! 
          But don’t worry! The story still remains the same, I just enhanced the pace of some scenes that felt a bit “slow”.
          Feel free to check the updated version if you’d like, and let me know what you think! 
          
          As always, thanks for your support