Bob28Larry

hey guys, i need your honest opinion on this. so i have re-read Badboys Baby and i really don’t like how i did the first 10 chapters in first person, should i edit it? also i think Louis and Harrys relationship was too fast, what does everyone think? does anyone have any tips? 

kw_1997

@Bob28Larry BRO I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!!! PLEASE COME BACKKK
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Sunshine_Lou91

@Bob28Larry PLS COME BACK I LOVE THAT FIC
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ButtonKarl3

@Bob28Larry BRO YOU ARE (excuse my language) FUCKN AMAZING WRITER SO DON'T DOUBT YOURSELF AND KEEP ON GOING IN LIFE NO MATTER HOW BAD YOUR GRAMMAR IS BUT THE STORY IS FUCKN AMAZING YOU SHOULD BECOME AN AUTHOR ONE DAY AND LAST 
          	  
          	  Have an amazing day or night or afternoon! :D
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kw_1997

Hey so I know you said you weren't gonna upload more parts to "The Bad Boys Baby" but like girl..that's such an amazing story and your writing is amazing! Hopefully you see this, I know LOTS of people will read your new parts if you were to add more..

Bob28Larry

hey guys, i need your honest opinion on this. so i have re-read Badboys Baby and i really don’t like how i did the first 10 chapters in first person, should i edit it? also i think Louis and Harrys relationship was too fast, what does everyone think? does anyone have any tips? 

kw_1997

@Bob28Larry BRO I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!!! PLEASE COME BACKKK
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Sunshine_Lou91

@Bob28Larry PLS COME BACK I LOVE THAT FIC
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ButtonKarl3

@Bob28Larry BRO YOU ARE (excuse my language) FUCKN AMAZING WRITER SO DON'T DOUBT YOURSELF AND KEEP ON GOING IN LIFE NO MATTER HOW BAD YOUR GRAMMAR IS BUT THE STORY IS FUCKN AMAZING YOU SHOULD BECOME AN AUTHOR ONE DAY AND LAST 
            
            Have an amazing day or night or afternoon! :D
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