Auraliarose
Hello! I noticed in your profile that you're open to reviewing other writer's works, and I was wondering if you could take a moment to try reading my book, Young Phoenix? I've been struggling with getting proper constructive criticism for a while and just really want to make my writing better. I'm open to all suggestions, and try to take all of my readers' opinions into consideration. Thanks for your time! Sincerely, Auralia Rose
Auraliarose
Thanks for the advice! I can tell you right now that only one of the guys falls for her (honestly I think the others might be a little scared ;) )
Bobbi-Hunter
@Auraliarose Hey! I have been super busy recently so I haven't really been able to read a lot of the book, but I love what I read so far! I think it has a lot of potential. The one piece of advice I have (keeping in mind I haven't gotten very far so I don't know where everything is going) don't have all the guys fall over her. Personally, I am annoyed when a girl gets all the guys in a book just because she is the main character. Keep up the great work!!!!!!