@SummerAthey I can, I can say my 1st and 2nd book I didn't like, but my 3rd book I feel I got better. It takes time to revise and rewrite. When you feel you have it right you notice then that you didn't. I feel so happy that you would ask me to do this, but I feel like I wouldn't be good at it. lol What would you like me to go over? A lot of things I tried to avoid is an immature writing. it's hard lol