meandmeandme

At least read it ONCE before you post it! AI is not good, it makes huge mistakes, that a human can spot in SECONDS! One chapter he is there for the birth, the VERY NEXT chapter he had missed it and throws himself a pity party. One chapter she knows, that he is in therapy, the VERY NEXT chapter she does NOT KNOW! Phrases are repeated, Whole parts of whole chapters are repeated, what she says to her unborn child is repeated (every single chapter!)! Silence can not smell like broken promises and so on and so on and SO ON! At least proofread it just ONCE and make sure, that you eliminate all those AI mistakes!!!

lconedy

Author,
          I was so caught up in your story, that I read it straight through without commenting after each chapter. It am all in! Daniel struggled in silence and chose to escape. I cannot wait to read whatever is coming next! Thank you!