I just finished all 3 of your stories. I enjoyed them all.
They do need to be fleshed out a little more tho. As well as smoothed out a bit. Sometimes it reads like more of an outline or chapter summary then an actual chapter. And it does jump or jerk around in the storyline.
Don't change it, just fill it in more. Give more detail and get more involved in what you already have going on.
I can't wait to read the next run through.