Boiiiiiib1g

I unpublished everything to properly edit it, don't worry it will be back 

annkrenz

I just finished all 3 of your stories.  I enjoyed them all. 
          
           They do need to be fleshed out a little more tho.  As well as smoothed out a bit.  Sometimes it reads like more of an outline or chapter summary then an actual chapter.  And it does jump or jerk around in the storyline.
          
          Don't change it, just fill it in more.  Give more detail and get more involved in what you already have going on.
          
          I can't wait to read the next run through.

Boiiiiiib1g

@annkrenz thankyou so much you have no idea how much this helps  
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Alex_B34

Is ‘My Troubled Life’ okay to read now? I don’t wanna be supper confused, but I reeeeeaaaaaaly wanna read it.

Alex_B34

Ty so much, I’ve been waiting
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Boiiiiiib1g

@Alex_B34 lol yes you can read it, I will probably tweak more things I it later on, but not soon. If it dosnt make sense once I've done all of the books I will :) 
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