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@seriously_s Sorry I haven’t answered yet! Work has been hectic haha! 
            Thank you so much for taking time out of your day to actually give me great feedback! I appreciate it sooooo much, truly :). I totally have plan to revise it soon as possible, as I’m slowly getting back into writing :) as for the pace thing, I can totally see where you’re coming from  To be honest, I think that came from me taking forever to finish the story and forgetting the little details in how I originally planned for the story to go lol. Silly me. 
            If you ever get the chance, I’m curious to know how you think of how it ended, as I’m not totally happy with it myself and honestly might re-write it if I ever get the chance. 
            All in all, thank you for the time you took reading the story, your feedback, and your support! Truly means the world to me :) 

Oops, I ended up writing a lot, sorry! 

@Bokoei so basically I tried to type feedback but it got lost bc my phone went into landscape mode so I'll put it in short. If you'd like more details just ask xx
            Spelling: good (I don't think I've seen many if any mistakes)
            Punctuation: mostly good, just a few mistakes here and there
            Style of writing: amazing! I love it
            Pace: it's mostly controlled but sometimes the pace isn't fast enough and other times it is. E.g. When Nanami was confessing about his AA you could have focused more onto Nanami and his emotions (too fast) . A time where it wasn't the best was when it wasn't fast enough for me: I think you wrote a bit where you'd almost do every single day that Nanami would visit Mieko but it wasn't too much dw
            But overall score is probably 8/10
            It's good and I would recommend it but I would warn them about things mentioned just to prepare the so they could enjoy it (I think you had warnings at the start of the chapters so I wouldn't worry about the latter point) 

gosh imma need that

@Bokoei and i'm here for it

Hi! You don’t come off as demanding at all!! I’m actually so happy you’re interested in the book enough to ask  <3 currently I’m facing a bit of writer’s block on all books/writing but especially in last words of a shooting star. I’m just not exactly sure how to continue it into the next plot point ): thank you for showing interest in it though, and I’ll try to update it soon ! <3 

@Bokoei I'm glad I actually helped

@nnieyeon36 actually no, thank you so much. That actually did make me feel better :) thank you so much <3 

Sorry I don't really know how to comfort someone 

@Bokoei I can imagine. Is the person who's been sending you those threats someone you know irl?

@AshiAshi6  you didn’t sound insensitive at all! I’m glad someone understands. I really don’t mind at all if people ask me to update my stories, and even if they put a little pressure on me because if it’s generally positive it motivates me to update. But a literal death threat?? I’m just so mind boggled rn. 

@Bokoei I happened to see your message by coincidence; someone's sending you death threats because they want you to update your work?! I'm sorry you have to go through that. I hope you can handle it and especially, that it won't escalate.
            
            That being said, and I hope the way I'm about to word this won't make me sound insensitive, begging an author to update their work is one thing - but sending them death threats? That's the most ridiculous thing ever. I may not have published any work of my own yet, but I've seen many cases where authors feel pressured to write because others keep asking them to update. Several authors suffer under that pressure to the point where they eventually don't enjoy writing anymore, and so their stories are left unfinished. Which is something I find very understandable. Feeling like you're pressured into doing something, often makes it impossible to enjoy it. What's this person trying to do, they want you to update so badly they attempt to give you hell? Thinking that will motivate you to update? How do they not realize it doesn't work that way, and never will? That's stupidity on a whole new level.
            
            I hope they stop it.

Congratulations Bestie

Congrats!