Bomber, I never got a notification that you followed me, but I want to thank you. I don't know which genre of my story you were reading, but as of right now, Undertale Before and After is being revised heavily by myself and a much older and wiser friend who knows grammar much better than me. As well it's also getting a new name change as Undertale Before And After is getting to a point where this name does not reflect well for where the story is at the moment. It's been renamed to Undertale: Before Their Fall—something much more fitting for Asriel and Chara, and the entire Underground.
