@Bombilinio
Feedback on chapter one of daughter of the sky son of the sea - I think you have a really good writing style and it was easy to follow the plot without getting confused or thinking it was too simple, I haven't read much Percy Jackson but I am a major (completely obsessed) fan of doctor who and also anything marvel! I hope the feedback was helpful to your writing
-Cheshire_Cat_24
Please finish daughter of the sky!!!!!
if u arent going to finish your book daughter of the sky then I would like to adopt it
@Artemis_E Hiya! Sorry I haven't been updating, I was planning on continuing my stories but I've been busy with exams recently. I am planning on continuing these though, so unfortunately I would prefer if you didn't use my Daughter of the Sky story. I appreciate your decency of asking though :) x
Spilt_Juice_24 Just to let you know, I'm gonna attempt to write a new Harry Potter story, to see how I get on with it. It'll be Fred Weasley instead of Draco. Let me know what you think of it, cos I know you liked the sound of my Draco fic. xxx