@WriterGirl004 I'm sorry, your stories don't quite appeal to me. I mean, they are good, in grammar and most likely plot but i feel like it's for a different audience rather than targeted at people like me. If I did have more grown up taste, I would definitely like your books. I'd recommend asking sm1 who likes the kind of books you make.
just go up to the profile of someone who makes similar books as you and ask them for their opinion, as it's probably wayy more valuable than mines.