Bonk626

hello! Death Paradox has been updated!
          	
          	
          	Chapter 23 od part two, Parallels,  is now available to read. Enjoy :)

Olive713

Yay!
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Bonk626

Death Paradox has been updated! Sorry one the wait. I literally wrote and rewrote this chapter like 5 times haha. Well enjoy!
          
          Chapter 21 is now available!

Olive713

I don’t mind the wait at all! Happy holidays btw
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PeachiePie379

@Bonk626 hooray!!! This is the best early Christmas gift >:)
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Bonk626

Death Paradox has been updated!
          
          
          The Hermint, Chapter 20 is up and available to read.

Olive713

@Bonk626  lol. I’m making. A bunch of stickers and magnets all for different Christmas parties. Some are due next weekend other in Christmas Day
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Bonk626

@Olive713  i also need to wrap gifts and I'm procrastinating hahaha
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Olive713

Yippee!
            
            
            ….now the question is: do I read it or continue working on the amount of Christmas gifts I have to make as soon as possible?
            Answer: read
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Bonk626

Doing the finishing touches this weekends for death paradox’s next chapter. 
          
          
          
          To add to that my first book has now qualified for the next round in the AMBYS. I’m so nervous lmfaooo
          
          
          ✨ AMBYS 2025 R3 QUALIFIER  ✨

Olive713

That’s awesome!!
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Bonk626

ok, so I have removed chapters 16-18 for Death Paradox, and rewrote small portions of chapter 15 (mostly just changed player numbers)  so that I can now proceed with confidence for this AU.
          
          The next few chapters should be back shortly after the adjustments are done!

_JunePurr_

I will say breaking down these chapters have been easier to read
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1500deadsouls

@Bonk626 I sadly had to sleep then go to work, didn’t get to read it, will do it tomorrow
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Bonk626

@1500deadsouls  i really only changed the player count. However, there is a treat in the author's note i put :)
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Bonk626

Okay, so I'm sorry for putting off Death Paradox for so long. I'm going to review the last tarot portion of Squid Games that I started, and it may end up being rewritten because of the way I want the plot to go. If you guys see chapters missing or swear that there was something different about this portion, it's probably cause it was at one point. 
          
          With this being said, A Shadow of the Past will be on hold for a bit so I can focus on fixing Death Paradox. Happy reading.

Bonk626

@Olive713 @1500deadsouls @Shorrtstacks than you all so much!
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Shorrtstacks

Take as much time as needed!❤️‍ your work is worth waiting for!
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Olive713

As said by 1500deadsouls, take your time! (At least you aren’t doing what I’m doing and saying you’re working on it and then doing nothing… I should probably work on that lol)
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Urfriendlydemon

Hi, I wanted to ask if you any advice for writing???I want to get better at it and I just don’t know where to start. Thanks for taking the time to look at this! Have a good day :p

Urfriendlydemon

@Bonk626  Thank you so much for the advice!!!!!! I’ll definitely try this! Have a good day!
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Bonk626

@Urfriendlydemon to be quite honest, that really depends on the style of writing you want to focus on. I've noticed that fanfiction, as a whole (as someone who writes/ reads it), is more in tune with how the main characters feel at a deeper, introspective level. For fanfic, the characters already have rich and mostly well-known traits/ history, so many readers going in already have a greater understanding of the character.  You’re not just telling a story; you’re translating familiar characters through new pressure points. Voice and emotional authenticity matter more than flashy plots, at least to me. 
            
            What I recommend is to start writing small first. Short scenes. Character moments. Dialogues. Don’t try to write a 10k fic in one day. and most importantly, FIND YOUR STYLE.
            
            Focus on one skill at a time. dialogue. pacing. internal monologue. Once you have something written out, I often sit there and read it multiple times and edit it as I go. I've noticed that this also really helps me make sure the cadence and prose of the fic stay fluid and don't suddenly change course. Hope this helps!
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