@ BookieBat Thank you so much to have took the time. I totally understand your point and, to be honest, the beginning is THE thing that I wanted to maybe rewrite. Something was bothering me since I wrote the first paragraph but I couldn't put my finger on it, now I see what it was and I am so sorry for it I didn't even realized it was that similar before told me, but for the mother, I have a reason for the obvious similarity. I wanted to make her to be something very specific, I have the whole development and even though I tried my hardest to make her different, I couldn't. The reason for this is that my inspiration for her is my grandmother and sadly she is very similar to the mother in your story, I just made her more cruel and that's it. But even with the best reasons, it's no excuse and I am truely sorry.
If you give me the permission, I love the idea of the outside root cell and I would love to change the beginning and use it. Thank you so much to believe in me, you have no idea how much it's means. I will keep in mind everything you said and continue to work on it. I'm really happy that you liked my ideas and for the voices, I can tell you that you're on the right track. For they're identify, stick around, no obligation thought but, I think you will like it. (So sorry for the atrocity of my response, I just saw your message and wanted to answer but I didn't sleep since +48 hours )