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@Tttiipp Hi! I just read on your wattpad profile that you are leaving and I am so sorry to hear that. But before you delete your profile would you mind updating the edits I have done for Twisted Obession like you said you would pretty please before you delete wattpad. Thank you for putting your trust in me editing some chapters for the story I had a blast and I am going to miss you. I hope you have a good year and thank you again.
Hi @Prettywildd! I love your story A Sinner's Obsession and the side story (don't know the title) as well. I wanted to let you know that when I was reading the new chapter of the side story last night something did not look right. In A Sinner's Obession chapter 43 where Jullian was about to get kidnapped he was heading downstairs to the kitchen until he stopped in front of Oliver's room hearing him talking on the phone with Jeremy. Then when I was reading the new chapter in the side story it says that Oliver was not only brushing his teeth but he was also pushing his toothbrush deeply inside his throat right before Jullian was taken. So I this is where I am confused about why there were two different scenes before Jullian was kidnapped? Also, I was curious why you decided not to have Oliver and Jeremy have their own story instead of adding it on to A Sinner's Obession? I feel like A Sinner's Obession should be a standalone story and make a new story of just about Oliver and Jeremy. I know you did a poll on that but I was curious why you ask your readers what they want instead of it just being a standalone story just like Jullian and Sin.
Hi! Yeah so maybe it wasn’t very clear but the call happened at dawn immediately or after sometime from when Sin and Jeremy left. The toothbrush scene was a few hours past that in the morning. I didn’t rewrite the call scene because it was written whole already in A Sinner’s Obsession. But no the scenes are one when Julian was about to get kidnapped and the other a few hours after when they finally discovered he actually got taken. I hope I explained it well! And as for the side story thing, I did the poll because I care about the preferences of my readers. Not only that, but also Ignite (the side story of Oliver and Jeremy) is heavily dependent on A Sinner’s Obsession. Like, one wouldn’t understand anything that’s happening if they didn’t read A Sinner’s Obsession, so it was more suitable that way. Plus as I said in my note, their story isn’t a whole book. It’s more like a novella and it’s not really plot heavy like Sin and Julian’s story. So it was the best option for it to be a side story. My next work will be a whole new book with new characters! Hope this helps <3
Hi @Vecnussy_69! For the next chapter of Taken can it be in Alex's POV of how he carried Cody back to his place? To me it would make since of how Cody was brought back to his place because in the old version it didn't say how Alex brought Cody back to his place after he passed out. If you like I can write that part for you like I did for the 1st chapter.
Firstly, I’m truly grateful for your support. It’s incredibly kind of you to offer, and it means more than you know, especially after losing two years of progress.That said, I want to keep Alex’s POV as minimal as possible, and that particular detail isn’t important enough for me to include, which is why I chose not to write it. I hope you understand. If I ever need a hand, I’ll definitely reach out to you. (◜‿◝)♡
@Vecnussy_69 Hi! I just sent you an email of my version of chapter 1 for Taken on how Alex kidnapped Cody. I hope you like it, and sorry for the wait. Please let me know when you have received it and when you re-edited chapter 1. Thank you for letting me do this for you. I really enjoyed it. I hope I didn't let you down. I worked really hard on it. Thanks again! : )
@Vecnussy_69 Awesome! How would you like me to send you my edit for Taken? Do you have Instagram? That's how I send my edits to another Author on Wattpad.
@Vecnussy_69 Yes I can do that. I will try to write either tonight or tomorrow and then I will let you know when I sent it to you. Thank you for trusting me on this.
@brighterthantheemoon Thank you for not giving up on the book I was worried about that. Also I just finished reading chapter 12 and something doesn't make since to me. How was Kyle able to suck Asher's dick while he forced himself inside Asher's mouth? It does not say how Kyle removed his penise and then moved himself down to such on Asher's penise. It still talks about how Asher was still being forced to suck on Kyle's penise while Kyle was giving Asher a blow job.
@Bookreaderlover95 hello! 69 position is still there & no, my feelings aren’t hurt. Other readers seemed to understand that it was a 69 position so I’m not too worried!
@brighterthantheemoon Hi! I hope I didn't hurt your feelings about chapter 12. I noticed that you taken off the 69 position in the chapter. Are you trying to rewrite it?
@brighterthantheemoon Thanks for clearing that up. But can you make it more clear about that position? It still doesnt make since because now it says, "my hands fly back, clawing blindly at his thighs, his hips,". How can Asher hold his hips when Kylenis facing away from him? Then it says, "Kyle exhales a satisfied breath above me." I think you should re-edited the part where you added the 69 position, like how Kyle turns around facing away from Asher? Also, I think you should re-edit some parts in the chapter after you mention the 69 position because if you read it more carefully it still talks about how Kyle is looking at Asher while he is forcing him to suck on his penis. Including a part where Asher's Mom comes in and Asher is trying to pull away, " I try to shake my head, try to pull away, but his grip only tightens, anchoring me harder to the floor." I hope I am not upsetting you I'm just trying to help you to see how your readers (including me) are reading from their point of view. It's a really good book! : )
@tttiipp Hi!!! I just finished writing a few chapters of Mafia's Stalker. I am about to follow you on Instagram. My name is Joi. I also added where to place them in the chapters. I hope you like it!
@tttiipp I just finished messaging you all the chapters I written plus 2 chapters of Dark Chain I also edited. I hope you like them. Let me know what you think. : )
Bro I’m not sure if you’re a girl or a boy but you are so sweet really. You are actually writing 2nd chapterr
… I’m crying. I tried to send an emoji but Wattpad doesn’t allow it (╥﹏╥)
Also thank you so much.
Please write my other books toooo
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@tttiipp Hi! I sadley did not get a chance to write yesterday and I am busy this weekend. I will write on Monday. I apologize : (
Do you want me to add the carrying part in the kidnapping chapter? If you want I can add it back to that chapter by including some more lines if that helps
@ttiipp could you maybe add the stalkers pov how he went into Ayan's room and drugged him and how he carried Ayan over his shoulder out of Ayan's room in chapter 2?
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✨ 10-year age gap
Brutal, possessive love
Mafia, betrayal, and dangerous obsession
⚖️ A romance so forbidden, it could destroy them both
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"Catch me if you can, Uncle Leo,"
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"Coming, little butterfly..."
He smirks, whistling a slow, eerie tune like a psychopath as he stalks toward her-unhurried, deliberate, like a predator toying with its prey.
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Leonardo Casanova, her guardian and once-trusted protector, warns her to stop digging.
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