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@Vecnussy_69 Hi! I just sent you an email of my version of chapter 1 for Taken on how Alex kidnapped Cody. I hope you like it, and sorry for the wait. Please let me know when you have received it and when you re-edited chapter 1. Thank you for letting me do this for you. I really enjoyed it. I hope I didn't let you down. I worked really hard on it. Thanks again! : )
@Vecnussy_69 Awesome! How would you like me to send you my edit for Taken? Do you have Instagram? That's how I send my edits to another Author on Wattpad.
@Vecnussy_69 Yes I can do that. I will try to write either tonight or tomorrow and then I will let you know when I sent it to you. Thank you for trusting me on this.
@brighterthantheemoon Thank you for not giving up on the book I was worried about that. Also I just finished reading chapter 12 and something doesn't make since to me. How was Kyle able to suck Asher's dick while he forced himself inside Asher's mouth? It does not say how Kyle removed his penise and then moved himself down to such on Asher's penise. It still talks about how Asher was still being forced to suck on Kyle's penise while Kyle was giving Asher a blow job.
@Bookreaderlover95 hello! 69 position is still there & no, my feelings aren’t hurt. Other readers seemed to understand that it was a 69 position so I’m not too worried!
@brighterthantheemoon Hi! I hope I didn't hurt your feelings about chapter 12. I noticed that you taken off the 69 position in the chapter. Are you trying to rewrite it?
@brighterthantheemoon Thanks for clearing that up. But can you make it more clear about that position? It still doesnt make since because now it says, "my hands fly back, clawing blindly at his thighs, his hips,". How can Asher hold his hips when Kylenis facing away from him? Then it says, "Kyle exhales a satisfied breath above me." I think you should re-edited the part where you added the 69 position, like how Kyle turns around facing away from Asher? Also, I think you should re-edit some parts in the chapter after you mention the 69 position because if you read it more carefully it still talks about how Kyle is looking at Asher while he is forcing him to suck on his penis. Including a part where Asher's Mom comes in and Asher is trying to pull away, " I try to shake my head, try to pull away, but his grip only tightens, anchoring me harder to the floor." I hope I am not upsetting you I'm just trying to help you to see how your readers (including me) are reading from their point of view. It's a really good book! : )
@tttiipp Hi!!! I just finished writing a few chapters of Mafia's Stalker. I am about to follow you on Instagram. My name is Joi. I also added where to place them in the chapters. I hope you like it!
@tttiipp I just finished messaging you all the chapters I written plus 2 chapters of Dark Chain I also edited. I hope you like them. Let me know what you think. : )
Bro I’m not sure if you’re a girl or a boy but you are so sweet really. You are actually writing 2nd chapterr
… I’m crying. I tried to send an emoji but Wattpad doesn’t allow it (╥﹏╥)
Also thank you so much.
Please write my other books toooo
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@tttiipp Hi! I sadley did not get a chance to write yesterday and I am busy this weekend. I will write on Monday. I apologize : (
Do you want me to add the carrying part in the kidnapping chapter? If you want I can add it back to that chapter by including some more lines if that helps
@ttiipp could you maybe add the stalkers pov how he went into Ayan's room and drugged him and how he carried Ayan over his shoulder out of Ayan's room in chapter 2?
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