Dear, Pardon me for not checking your book as I'm not well currently. Till what I've read, I must say you have a great potential to be an absolutely amazing author. I could see your imagination beyond your words. Few things I'd like to point out, of which the first is, the chapters are really short. The best size of the chapter should be 1100 - 1200 words. Secondly, your sentences are short and quick, not that it's bad but in relative places if you'd twist the sentence beautifully and elongate it, then it would really look good. A little focus on the dialogues and you'll get it right, trust me. You're already really good. I hope your best in future (: ❤️
