Books4Life80000

Intro published prologue will soon as possible https://www.wattpad.com/story/143415405

DakotaSlash

So far so good. You still make basic mistakes in punctuation, spelling, and structure but I can see you improved your skills. I feel more interested in the plot of the story than the last despite loving the pair bumbleby and being hesitant when it comes to OCs. Feel free to ask me to critique anything else.

Books4Life80000

@Books4Life80000 You will see the last member of team crimson at initiation
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Books4Life80000

@DakotaSlash Also will make another pairing story just comment which pairing and I Will make it
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Books4Life80000

@DakotaSlash Thanks again I will work on defining characters and the punctuation for speech. Also make more sense with descriptions
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DakotaSlash

While I do think you’re writing skills could use some work, I’m not the most qualified to help with this. My only experience with writing outside of school involves overlooking projects one of my best friends make because her dream is to be an author. If you want help, I would suggest looking elsewhere.

Books4Life80000

@DakotaSlash  Hello i have published the intro and prologue for my RWBY oc fanfiction The strength inside. Feel free to read it and give feedback
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DakotaSlash

Kay
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Books4Life80000

@DakotaSlash When I start my other stories feel free to read then and give feedback on what I can still improve on.
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Kim4petesake

Hi. I just wanted to thank you for adding my story "Breathe" to your list. It means the world to me. I hope you enjoy the story as it progresses. Feel free to give feedback as this is my first book. Thanks again! :)
          
           

Books4Life80000

@Kim4petesake Your welcome feel free to add my stories. I'm still working on them so I would appreciate feedback. Thanks kim
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