@maxd01 You're very welcome! That story was excellent. If possible, could you give me a reading order for your other stories? I will more than likely read them all. Lol.
I would also like to say again that your grammar and spelling was pretty good. No it wasn't perfect but even edited, published books have mistakes. I see them all the time. I can be a bit of a grammar Nazi at times. I don't get mad about it or anything but I almost always notice mistakes. I can honestly say that your story was above the norm for this site. I have actually come across stories on here that had such horrible spelling and grammar mistakes, that I couldn't even understand what was trying to be said.
I am by no means a writer. I am a reader through and through. And I read a lot! I also do not comment on stories. No reason why I suppose, I just don't. Lol. If I like a chapter, I vote. If the stories are good enough, I follow and read what else they have posted.
So I would like to say thank you for the wonderful creations of your imagination and I look forward to reading what else you have posted. :)