BossStick1289

To preface, I understand any hate or annoyance this will get.
          	I have found myself unable to finish The Hardest Choice due to it (currently) having a sloppy, unclear plot, sucky characterization, a general lack of emotional beats, sucky dialogue, overly-wordy exposition, etc.
          	But does that mean I'm done? Hell no. I have not been idle since my last update; I have instead been planning and storyboarding and actually finally hammering out the PRE-writing things. I have what I think is a moving, quality plot and have figured out the direction I want Y/N's arc to go in and to finish with.
          	With all that said, I will be rewriting this story AGAIN. Not only will I be improving the general writing, but also the characterization, dialogue, flow of POVs, foreshadowing, etc. I understand that many of you probably would rather me just finish the story, sloppy as it is, but I simply cannot. Please have patience, and please give it a read if you would once it has been rewritten.
          	Thank you!

BWShadow1

 good, that’s is a great plan.
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BossStick1289

To preface, I understand any hate or annoyance this will get.
          I have found myself unable to finish The Hardest Choice due to it (currently) having a sloppy, unclear plot, sucky characterization, a general lack of emotional beats, sucky dialogue, overly-wordy exposition, etc.
          But does that mean I'm done? Hell no. I have not been idle since my last update; I have instead been planning and storyboarding and actually finally hammering out the PRE-writing things. I have what I think is a moving, quality plot and have figured out the direction I want Y/N's arc to go in and to finish with.
          With all that said, I will be rewriting this story AGAIN. Not only will I be improving the general writing, but also the characterization, dialogue, flow of POVs, foreshadowing, etc. I understand that many of you probably would rather me just finish the story, sloppy as it is, but I simply cannot. Please have patience, and please give it a read if you would once it has been rewritten.
          Thank you!

BWShadow1

 good, that’s is a great plan.
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BossStick1289

Rewriting Chapter 8: Vision. I don't like it stylistically and there's some major plot points that have changed or been added that don't fit with it. If you're already further into the story, I would suggest rereading that chapter when it's finished (I will make an announcement). Thank you