Eliza_beth_Topaz
Greetings! I'm an aspiring author who just recently started publishing my book. I would really appreciate feedback on my book so I know if I should move forward!)
Thanks).
InkyPotatoes
Criticism + Feedback to the author:
Hello! Thanks for taking your precious time in your day to read this. It's very appreciated if you give feedback to my book too!
One, The plot. I feel could've been better if given more time and not rushed. take your time and don't rush to update.
Two, the length of the book. Maybe a 600 - 2000 word chapter could be nice.
Three, question marks and exclamation marks. Use these two of them but dont overuse it.
And... Congratulations! You can made it to the end! Hope you improve a little bit because of my criticism. Have a good day! <3
InkyPotatoes
@BoyOfFantasy I used to have the same problem, but something I realized that the updates that come slower and late are better and the one's on time is rushed and bad. Yes, there are A few consequences you have to deal with if you update late, but I suggest you to update late and dont stress yourself out.
BoyOfFantasy
@InkyPotatoes Yes I understand what you mean by the plot, im at a crossroad I want to take my time advancing but I feel like it would become boring if I write the plot to slow but if I rush it it will be all mashed up together and confusing
LoveOreos4Life
Would you like to do a read for read? New authors should support each other! :)
