So I read the first chapter and It’s definitely got a good storyline so far, my only problem so far is grammar, but I do understand if you aren’t a strong english speaker from which, if you wish, I can offer advice for. However you don’t have to if you don’t want to. Unless it’s a request, it’s really all down to the author on how they write. Again, it’s really good, you have talent there, it just needs to be built up. Thank you so much for reading my fics though. ☺️☺️