Brandi McClure

Hello @Brandi!!! I go by Ocean on Wattpad, and I actually love your Elrich Saga books!! I love how you incorporated the art of reincarnation/transmigration, and it has helped inspire a few works of my own. Anyways, what I’m trying to say is, if and when ever you do have time could you possible take a looked at my current book, Northstrom: A Birth of A Hero? There are a total of 3 chapters but 4 parts because of an authors note. Any help is appreciated! I just don’t know if I’m going on the right track or if it’s too much and confusing as of now. I do understand if you don’t have the time, life happens, but I thank you anyways and hope your flow of magical words never stop!!!

I'm having some issues with formatting. Nothing I've tried so far has worked. I might Have to go back and copy this all into google docs just to get the formating right which is frustrating. Please stick with me while I figure this out. I know it's frustrating reading WORDSTHATALLRUNTOGETHER. *Face Desk*

Hi! I just wanted to say, i'm loving your story. No pressure intended, but are you planning on continuing? Ive noticed there's not been much of an update since May of this year.

I'm just letting everyone know that I haven't left Eri. I'm working on the editing and since I had to go further back in the story than I thought to fix my mistake it's taking some time and a lot of re-writting. I wanted ERi to be gender fluid but I finally realized that's not really who he is. So I was having some issues with his gender. My premise was that ERi would be able to switch genders at will and be fine with it.  That's not who he is though, he's neruotic and bisexual but he's not really a girl and won't ever be comfortable as a female. SO I had to change a LOT. My plan was for him to become comfortable with his female side and embrace it. THe more I wrote book 3 the more I realized that ERi's gender change in book 2 wasn't going to work. It's not a spoiler. So I've had to go back and re-work not just one but 2 books. This meant cutting a sexy scene I was actually really proud of. I think all the work I'd done and the amount of fixing made me lose my love of this story for a while. When you have that much to fix it's not easy to face up to the fact that it's not working.  I'm hoping you won't lose your affection for Eri.

I don't like the way the story is going so I'm going back and rewriting a chunk of it. It won't affect book one at all, but it will change book 2 more than a bit. I'm going to start fixing things from after Eri has his breakdown. I have published some of the stuff that will be changed. The changed chapters will be altered after they are done.

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Book 2 is done. Editing is happening but it's slow going. I've been re-reading and adding and deleting things. Cohesion is something I'm working on. I want The Island to blend in well with Eri's narrative and I'm having some difficulty finding a personality for someone. I finally got a clue last night and I think I'll do some more editing. Eri's story book 3 is started. Rille's story is still not done, but I do have an outline for how the story works and ends. It's just that her story is so much darker and during this moment in history I can't bring myself to write something that gets so dark.

Just a heads up for my underage readers. Starting around Chapter 50 I will have to change the suggested age range for this series. As my followers know Eri is a Succuba, which means sexy things happen. Some of these things will not be appropriate for those under the age of 18 (or the legal age in whatever country you are in.) In the future, I might consider something along the lines of 2 versions of the same chapter, but that isn't in the works just yet.  I don't wish to offend or alienate anyone. I've always had my story tagged with LGBTQ for a reason. So if you don't like same-sex coupling or poly relationships you might want to get out while you still can. This story will have both and will continue to have both.

Chapter 36 of Elrich is now up. Eri goes Hunting with Ave. https://www.wattpad.com/946955390-elrich-saga-yellow-springs-book-two-chapter-36-i

I've just posted chapter 35. I hope you enjoy it.