BraydenJohnson
As I'm sure many of you have noticed, I pretty much vanished for awhile, without much of an explanation as to why. And I'm sure others have noticed many of my stories have vanished. I'll explain both one at a time. As for my disappearing, it's as simple as life just being life. I went through two moves within the past year and got out of a very toxic job. I've also started work on a project with a close friend of mine—a friend that'll force me to see it to the end. I'll explain more about it in another post, for those genuinely interested. Anyway.... I do intend on keeping Boys and Stuck Between Claws and Fangs on my page, though. As far as when they will be updated? I honestly don't know. I don't have internet at my new place yet, so updating anything is gonna be a hassle. However, I do intend on remedying that very soon. Once I get internet set up at my flat, I'll probably focus on reworking Boys to be a bit better written and better planned. Which leads me to my next explanation....
Loucina242
@BraydenJohnson Hay then, it's okay. I know that your going through personal stuff and I completely understand. I have personal stuff I got going on as well. Have poor internet sucks ik. Plus, I struggle on essays back in high-school. I was about 16 when I couldn't pass my exams casue I was still struggling. But with lots of help, self taught and support, I embrace it and learn how to write my own poem by knowledge. Plus wrote my creepypasta called Marxin, but before writing it on my computer, I have to write it on paper first and then I'll do it on a computer. I did it with my own creativity. Last time I did the same thing, it was too blank and boring and most of the parts don't make any sense. So I thought more creative and added a little bit of some action and more detail. To make it more intriguing. The story that I make was very tedious, but it was worth it. But hay if you willing to read, feel free to do so I won't mind. I dont mimd if you vote the story or for you to give your opinion. When every you get the chance. Once again I understand what your going through casue I have to move from NY to GA casue of something terrible happend. But yeah i hope your get internet soon and I indeed hope that life is treating you better since you moved and etc Also I'm new btw so its nice to meet you Braydon. I'm Loucina btw. But, if you want, you can call me Moon.
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BraydenJohnson
The disappearance of my old works. Short answer is, I have been getting a lot of comments about the writing—A Twist in My Story especially. And while I don't mind constructive criticism, I was just tired of being reminded of a story I had written when I was 15 and didn't know how to plan ANYTHING out. Looking back on that book, it was an absolute mess. The characters were a mess and unlikeable. The plot made no sense. Everything was rushed. So on and so forth. I guess the explanation behind the poor writing is that a lot of it was just me having random thoughts and ideas and trying to cram them all into it at the last second—which is something I really don't recommend. Now, I write everything down in notes so I know the direction I wanna go. My writing needs desperate work, which is why I've been reading a lot of classic novels lately. I'm hoping it'll improve my vocabulary as well as my writing skills. Once again, I apologize for my disappearing and failing to update everything. I hope to get back to my old groove soon. Thank you all for understanding. ~ Rhylie
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