Hey, I decided to post this comment on your profile page to avoid any kind of confusion on your end :)
By the way, very nice story so far. I may not be an expert in this department as you are but in terms of Take home reading, I think you have more knowledge about it than I do. :) Still I suggest you sniff around here and search for "Cassanova" esque type of story from well recognized authors in here. Can't give specifics since I'm not actually hooked to Cassanovas myself hahaha
Checking out the two authors I've mentioned in our PM session could also help I guess, but their works are not written in English language, but I think you can get some ideas from them.
Goodluck B.A.G (BreakAwayGirl) on your story. It's already in my crosshairs :)