BreakingPointStories

Ok so this was brought to my attention a while ago, I'm just addressing it now in case there's any potential confusion or otherwise.
          	
          	On Fanfiction.net there's a pair of stores called Incredible Heroes 1 and 2. If you read both stories, you might notice a little bit of a similarity to my own story of Incredible Spider.
          	
          	So I'm going to put this straight, that author and I are not the same person. They claim that the similarities between my story and theirs is purely coincidental, but if you read some of their chapters. Some of them are ripped verbatim from my story. And my story, the bulk of my story was written in 2019 and 2020.
          	
          	Now first and foremost, obviously don't go and harass this person and their audience and say stupid stuff and do stupid things. That's not the point of me bringing this up, but....what I am going to do is this.
          	
          	If nothing else, it seems to me that a large majority of these stories' audiences do not realize that a good chunk of those stories are copied. So please, inform those people. Go to the chapters of the stories that are particularly and egregiously copied from Incredible Spider and point it out.
          	
          	However, and do this too. Compliment the author of those stories on the things that they changed. Because among everything that is copied, there are genuinely whole scenes that are wholly original. So commend the author for the portions that are original to them, but inform the audience on the parts that are copied directly from me.
          	
          	I tried to reach out to the author of those stories independently and tried to point out examples, but they wouldn't listen. So, now I'm making this a public issue so that way people fully understand that this story that they read and that the author is touting as original is for the most part not.
          	
          	I appreciate your existences, be good people about this, be civil about this and most of all
          	
          	Be responsible about this,
          	
          	BreakingPointStories.

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@BreakingPointStories @BreakingPointStories you are going to continue the story of helluvas and danny phantom
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deathslade200315

I do wonder what people in hell and heaven think of exactly is the rider. Because in viziepop helluvaverse  because you native inhabitants that can reproduce which are demons, hellords, royalty and seven deadly which look like traditional demons but as well you have sinners souls that can't reproduce but did evil in life and usually there physical appearance represents themselves like animals, objects or substance and for the most part there less capable then demons and need souls as well as time to become overlords then you have fallen angels which are rare but extremely powerful but I bet for all those in hell the rider is a mysterious anomaly that doesn't fit in because he can go anywhere in which is important because there are parts isolated from sinners and demons. Because physically he wears traditional biker clothes and generally is human shape which is very sinner like but then there is a skeleton on fire which is considered very demon like but then he has monstrous strength, nearly limitless energy and can indore any type of damage to a point where every extermination he decides to fight the exterminator angels for fun which is very angel like if not a high tier angel like seraphim and archangels then goes back to hang out with sinners but unlike them and just like demons he accepted hell as his home but yet he seems to help and protect the innocent like the angels so yeah this is very interesting.

deathslade200315

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For the hells rider how is his personality because in the beginning of story he has standard depiction of the ghost rider he is scary, intimidating, quiet and has the urge to punish guilty and protect the innocent plus it feels he was just born. But then all of sudden now he is funny, witty, has a sense of humor and beats for the fun of it but weird though he can overpowered angels with a flick of the wrist to a point it clockwork but yet shaken by alastor who should be nowhere near ball park of zarrothos don't get me wrong for a sinner and a overlord he is incredibly powerful but he not even a demon in fact demons like seven deadly sins and angels like Adam rank above him so to have zarrothos a being who known for having great strength scared is just weird also nice touch with angel blade hurting him but not killing him because in the lore the only way to kill ghost rider host is to chop off his head and keep away from the body with a weapon forge in heaven and once held by archangel yes a weapon that rare but to kill the spirit zarrothos you literally need God to actively destroy him for good but overall this is a great story and I am just sharing my thoughts and some lore please don't take it at any offense and please see it as commentary.

BreakingPointStories

@deathslade200315 It's not like I necessarily need help with the lore details. Because my main goal is to streamline it in a way that can feasibly make sense given the version of biblical events that the Hellaverse is working with.
            
            Like, I had to adjust Alejandra's origin and history a bit because her normal comics history is literally all intertwined with Marvel's version of Adam. Who's vastly different than this Adam, so I'm having to make adjustments depending on how it may or may not fit.
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deathslade200315

@deathslade200315 If you need help with the lore as well details behind it and how to streamline it to fit into your story and if you want to you can message me and I can help you out with want, I am not trying not to be rude it just a suggestion if you need any help at all.
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BreakingPointStories

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@deathslade200315 So part of this story is a bit of a writing experiment for me. I am painfully aware of the fact that Ghost Rider lore is a complete mess, and so I saw the relatively streamlined and simplified biblical lore of the Hellaverse and thought to myself
            
            "If there's any way to make any of this shit make sense, this version of biblical events will probably be my best chance"
            
            As for your question regarding his personality, it's one of those situations where his desire to protect the innocent is still there. However, you are correct in the assessment of it feeling like Rider (like, the guy you're reading about) is just born. I have a bit of a plan for what exactly is actually going on with him, and you'll just have to wait for more of the story to come out to start seeing what I'm trying to do here.
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Athrun0505

Tell me, have you thought about the story in which Harry Osborne became Spider-Man? This would be interesting because Harry has always wanted approval from his father, and his father is a villain, and here he will have to make a choice: either get his father's approval and become a villain, or become a hero and go against his father.No one ever wanted to make Harry Spider-Man. This has never happened in comics (although The Flash, Mary Jane, and even Gwen Stacy were like that), and even in fan fiction it wasn't. Therefore, it gives a lot of room for imagination, because Harry is far from the last person in the history of the spider.

Athrun0505

DC Comics Superman: Speeding Bullets 1993. Have you read this, if yes, what do you think. I highly recommend it. In this story, Superman fell near the home of Wayne's family, they adopted him and named him Bruce. In short, Superman became Batman. (https://readcomiconline.li/Comic/Superman-Speeding-Bullets ). Think about it, it's cool. Batman, who will not be taken by any weapon, will not be held in any prison. Batman, who can rightly be called a demon. Do you think you could come up with a cool story on this topic?