BreakingPointStories

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Legitimate question, because since working on Hell's Rider. I've had....ideas.
          	
          	Would you all be opposed to me also working on a version of Helluva Boss where ... Zarathos never left?
          	
          	Like, the betrayal never happened. Zadkiel held off on her plan just a little while longer.
          	
          	Zarathos and Stolas just got to...be in the same space as each other. And Stolas can finally have someone in his corner to help back him up when shit starts going monumentally sideways?
          	
          	Would you guys read that?
          	
          	Would you guys like to actually also learn what my version of Mephistopheles/Mephisto and Blackheart are like in the capacity that's more than just flashbacks to their literal deaths?
          	
          	Would you like to actually SEE Zarathos interact with his peers? I'm sure I can drum up some drama to make it seem like Zarathos isn't just going to be the blunt brick wall that helps Stolas and Blitzø solve all of their problems.
          	
          	I'm debating trying that....I just want to know.
          	
          	Would you all actually READ it if I DID it?

BreakingPointStories

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Legitimate question, because since working on Hell's Rider. I've had....ideas.
          
          Would you all be opposed to me also working on a version of Helluva Boss where ... Zarathos never left?
          
          Like, the betrayal never happened. Zadkiel held off on her plan just a little while longer.
          
          Zarathos and Stolas just got to...be in the same space as each other. And Stolas can finally have someone in his corner to help back him up when shit starts going monumentally sideways?
          
          Would you guys read that?
          
          Would you guys like to actually also learn what my version of Mephistopheles/Mephisto and Blackheart are like in the capacity that's more than just flashbacks to their literal deaths?
          
          Would you like to actually SEE Zarathos interact with his peers? I'm sure I can drum up some drama to make it seem like Zarathos isn't just going to be the blunt brick wall that helps Stolas and Blitzø solve all of their problems.
          
          I'm debating trying that....I just want to know.
          
          Would you all actually READ it if I DID it?

BreakingPointStories

Ooooookay, so I started using my DeviantArt account and am actually using it and likely going to try and use other avenues (might try Fanfiction.net and maybe even Ao3) to share the story and help it reach wider audiences.
          
          However, my DeviantArt got hacked/locked. I'm working on trying to get it back.
          
          Once I do, would you like if (alongside uploading the chapters of HH: HR) I make writing journals that give insights into my thought processes when I was writing out different parts of the story?
          
          Not even just "What was I thinking when adapting this particular episode or part of an episode" but like "How did I think of this particular aspect of this particular character" type thing?
          
          Would you guys read that?

StreetGuard94

@BreakingPointStories Oh, that's good! Thank goodness.
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BreakingPointStories

@StreetGuard94 Oh I did. I got it back on the fourth.
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Penance11

Nice GhostRider/Hellaverse story

Penance11

I’m primarily working on my fic for the most part.
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Penance11

4-5 chapters in
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BreakingPointStories

@Penance11 Thank you. How far along are you in it so far?
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sunnybeiwb

When will you update next chapter for Hell's Rider

BreakingPointStories

@sunnybeiwb oh damn, you're fully caught up.
            
            What were your favorite chapters/moments
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sunnybeiwb

Forgiven and Forged Together
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BreakingPointStories

@sunnybeiwb where are you at in the story?
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deathslade200315

I do wonder what people in hell and heaven think of exactly is the rider. Because in viziepop helluvaverse  because you native inhabitants that can reproduce which are demons, hellords, royalty and seven deadly which look like traditional demons but as well you have sinners souls that can't reproduce but did evil in life and usually there physical appearance represents themselves like animals, objects or substance and for the most part there less capable then demons and need souls as well as time to become overlords then you have fallen angels which are rare but extremely powerful but I bet for all those in hell the rider is a mysterious anomaly that doesn't fit in because he can go anywhere in which is important because there are parts isolated from sinners and demons. Because physically he wears traditional biker clothes and generally is human shape which is very sinner like but then there is a skeleton on fire which is considered very demon like but then he has monstrous strength, nearly limitless energy and can indore any type of damage to a point where every extermination he decides to fight the exterminator angels for fun which is very angel like if not a high tier angel like seraphim and archangels then goes back to hang out with sinners but unlike them and just like demons he accepted hell as his home but yet he seems to help and protect the innocent like the angels so yeah this is very interesting.

deathslade200315

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For the hells rider how is his personality because in the beginning of story he has standard depiction of the ghost rider he is scary, intimidating, quiet and has the urge to punish guilty and protect the innocent plus it feels he was just born. But then all of sudden now he is funny, witty, has a sense of humor and beats for the fun of it but weird though he can overpowered angels with a flick of the wrist to a point it clockwork but yet shaken by alastor who should be nowhere near ball park of zarrothos don't get me wrong for a sinner and a overlord he is incredibly powerful but he not even a demon in fact demons like seven deadly sins and angels like Adam rank above him so to have zarrothos a being who known for having great strength scared is just weird also nice touch with angel blade hurting him but not killing him because in the lore the only way to kill ghost rider host is to chop off his head and keep away from the body with a weapon forge in heaven and once held by archangel yes a weapon that rare but to kill the spirit zarrothos you literally need God to actively destroy him for good but overall this is a great story and I am just sharing my thoughts and some lore please don't take it at any offense and please see it as commentary.

BreakingPointStories

@deathslade200315 It's not like I necessarily need help with the lore details. Because my main goal is to streamline it in a way that can feasibly make sense given the version of biblical events that the Hellaverse is working with.
            
            Like, I had to adjust Alejandra's origin and history a bit because her normal comics history is literally all intertwined with Marvel's version of Adam. Who's vastly different than this Adam, so I'm having to make adjustments depending on how it may or may not fit.
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deathslade200315

@deathslade200315 If you need help with the lore as well details behind it and how to streamline it to fit into your story and if you want to you can message me and I can help you out with want, I am not trying not to be rude it just a suggestion if you need any help at all.
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BreakingPointStories

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@deathslade200315 So part of this story is a bit of a writing experiment for me. I am painfully aware of the fact that Ghost Rider lore is a complete mess, and so I saw the relatively streamlined and simplified biblical lore of the Hellaverse and thought to myself
            
            "If there's any way to make any of this shit make sense, this version of biblical events will probably be my best chance"
            
            As for your question regarding his personality, it's one of those situations where his desire to protect the innocent is still there. However, you are correct in the assessment of it feeling like Rider (like, the guy you're reading about) is just born. I have a bit of a plan for what exactly is actually going on with him, and you'll just have to wait for more of the story to come out to start seeing what I'm trying to do here.
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Athrun0505

Tell me, have you thought about the story in which Harry Osborne became Spider-Man? This would be interesting because Harry has always wanted approval from his father, and his father is a villain, and here he will have to make a choice: either get his father's approval and become a villain, or become a hero and go against his father.No one ever wanted to make Harry Spider-Man. This has never happened in comics (although The Flash, Mary Jane, and even Gwen Stacy were like that), and even in fan fiction it wasn't. Therefore, it gives a lot of room for imagination, because Harry is far from the last person in the history of the spider.