Brearose10

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          - a fairy wielding a sword?
          - forced proximity training between two people who want nothing to do with each other?
          - the trope where he has to help her from behind for training purposes.
          
          Look no further than chapter 26 of the Balance. Published now!

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Hey friend! Would you be down for V4V and f4f for Ng281N? If you're comfortable with that, my book is "Lửa & Tro Tàn" 🥰🥰 I'll return the votes and follows using my accounts Ahjhj_001 or Ng281N. Thanks so much! ❤️❤️❤️

F4F and V4V?
          
          The book is in my reading list 
          
          Follow the writer of that book 
          and vote for all chapters 

I'm going back to work from summer break so I will be posting less. I will engage when I can !

‼️✏️ Feedback Needed
          
          I need help with Chapter 13: Vitomir's Secret in The Balance. I personally really like how the chapter goes, but I have had some feedback that it reveals too much backstory in one part and that could slow the story down. I want to know what actual readers think about it! Thank you in advance!

Chapter 11  revised! - Beth clutched the table with both hands and let out a small, surprised gasp, never having gotten two visions in one reading before. Friedrich jumped backwards, almost falling out of his chair, rendered speechless as he waited for Beth to come around. Eventually came back to after about a minute, blinking softly, tears in her eyes. She gave a soft smile and apologized, explaining how having a second vision startled her.
          
          “Well, what did you see?” Beth noted to herself that Friedrich’s interest had definitely piqued, as she saw he had goosebumps over his tan flesh. Beth put her hand over her heart; her vision provided her with an entirely new outlook on Friedrich and who he might become.
          
          “Your daughter,” she began, only to be cut off by Friedrich hitting the table, standing up and exclaiming,
          
          “I don’t have a daughter!”
          
          “No, not yet, but you will. You will have a daughter and three sons,”
          
          “No, you are wrong,” Friedrich shook his head, sliding back down into his seat. Beth made sure that her steady gaze met his before replying.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398672303

I have posted chapter 10 of the Balance rewrite - The group is analyzed by Vitomir and are forced to self reflection . Also Friedrich reveals a surprising historical tradition.
          
           I am curious if you find the chapter too long and if the POV shifts are clear and not confusing. 
          
          Enjoy! 

I have rewritten the Prologue - Chapter 3 of The Balance. I am curious if it flows better in the rewrite?

Brearose 
          
          Thank you for following our story.
          
          Trey and I married young (only 18 and 19) and nearly thirty-five years later we’ve experienced every shade of marriage: the wild joy, the quiet growth, the hard seasons that nearly broke us, and the deep, enduring love that always pulled us back together. Aging together has taught us that true love isn’t untouched by pain, it’s what survives it and grows stronger because of it.
          
          This is our story of rediscovery, tender, passionate, and yes, very spicy. We’d love for you to read along and share your thoughts in the comments to help shape where we go next.
          
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          We’re so grateful you’re here. ❤️