BreezyandCheer7

@accessys hi, sorry I wrote this when I was 11 this was five years ago:') that's why it's not always factually correct. x

leighdegennaro

I would absolutely love if you gave my book Detached a read! Getting this book published in the future is a huge goal, dream and priority for me. I've been reading and writing horse books/novels since I can remember. Since third grade I wanted to publish a horse novel and it's always been seen as a dream but I finally realized I could really make this happen. I want to give equestrians something interesting, well written and unpredictable to read. I am so confident this book will be a success so I'm doing my best to get it as much attention as possible. Your book "The Broken Horse." is very successful and it would make me happy as hell if you checked out my book.  If you're interested in this book, give it a read and let me know what you think! Thank you :)

redaer21

Omg do u ride, I do I just adore riding it's like my life
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BreezyandCheer7

I'll give it a look now:)
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accessys

if you were 11 when you wrote that it is well above average, I thought it was written by at least someone late in high school or in college. 
          
          you are a good writer a rewrite might make it a great book.
          
          keep writing

accessys

you obviously love and know horses.
          
          but your knowledge of spinal cord injury is somewhat less complete,  as someone with a spinal cord injury I can assist you or make some suggestions.
          
          obviously one does not get out of the hospital in 3 weeks lucky if it is 3 months and rehab can take a year or so.  there is I am sure your aware horseback riding for people with disabilitiies, even in the paralympics.
          
          however an injury as high as you have in this story would not be able to move her arms or hands and would need a motorized wheelchair.    
          
          hope this helps some, keep writing
          accessys