BrendanTheBored

My device really buggin rn.
          	Legit can’t access the home page of Wattpad and when I try it’s just the search bar, try premium, and the orange W, can’t interact with any of it

Asurathagoat

Thanks I truly appreciate your support! Everyday when I'm writing these chapters, I double, triple check if the scenes and dialogue I'm writing are absolute fire. I push myself to write the best because, even though this dream I have may sadly never come true, I still hope that one day someone will want to put my story into a comic dub and post it on yt. I have reached out to a yt fan VA who was offering to do comic dubs for people, but when I sent her my electric love story it was rejected. So then I was like okay, maybe she rejected it because it's a male reader story and she probably thinks that it is just a bunch of harem nonsense(Which it is not). So I sent her this story, thinking she would give it a chance since its not a male reader story and because it focuses on female characters. But she didn't even respond this time. All in all I thought my current story would grab the VA's attention because I thought this was a very interesting world I set up and thought she would be interested in my concepts. I look at the fan stories that she is doing on her channel, and they are good because they explore a different aspect of the show. But I know that my stories are just as good and are worthy of being dubbed and put on yt. Look, you and other people have read the other story, you know at multiple points of the story it was absolute cinema, hands down! Heck even in this one, chapter 6, Prey, was absolute cinema, that was my best and favorite chapter! Anyway I'm going to stop yapping, the point is I'm confident in myself as a writer and I know my stories are good and worthy of being adapted into a comic dub or animation because I put my blood sweat and tears and into every one of these chapters to make it as good for yall as possible and regardless if the YouTubers feel the same I'm going to continue to push hard and give yall the best stories I can produce. Again Thank you for supporting me since day one!

Asurathagoat

@Asurathagoat Thanks man. After this story is done their will be a prequel to finish the series and in this prequel I will be collaborating with a small MD YouTuber named Steel. I will be using his oc to support the main character. 
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BrendanTheBored

@Asurathagoat Well let's hope it's only uphill from here(I hate I can't write an entire essay to respond rn cuz I'm tired instead of bored for once but hope you get the attention you deserve)
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ShelledCrane017

I’ve finished chapters 13.5, 14, and 15, and I’m hoping to wrap up the epilogue (Chapter 16) tomorrow. I hope you enjoy the more connected storyline I've developed for the finale, especially in Episode 13.5, which is a special. Your idea for the story really helped me break through my creative block with the drones I introduced—one of them will have knowledge of how to free Cyn from Absolute Solver's body so it can be destroyed. Looking forward to sharing what I hope is a satisfying ending! Also, I’m planning a 'what if' scenario where everyone falls in love with a N x Uzi x V x J dynamic. Also from now on if I make story’s I will make them only around 10 chapter and make the plot better overall. 

BrendanTheBored

@ShelledCrane017 ik three other good stories, behind red eyes a OC story, murder drones nexus, another OC story that has its most recent chapter at 25k words, and electric love a Y/N x doll+cyn(it gets complicated) and a sequel story about there kids
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ShelledCrane017

@BrendanTheBored thank you just gave me hours of content 
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BrendanTheBored

@ShelledCrane017 sounds fun, also if you are ever bored(like me) there is another MD wattpad creator called swimminginnowhere and they make some pretty good stories
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ShelledCrane017

Chapter 12:them fixing robot
          
          Chapter  13:them meeting the robots
          
          Chapter 14: them going on one final adventure part 1-3 to remove Cyn from Uzi as one drone know a cure 
          
          Chapter 15: final chapter 
          
          Extra chapter for a 1k special with 6 way between N Uzi V J Tessa Lizzy 
          
          How does that sound 
          
          
          
          

ShelledCrane017

@BrendanTheBored last thing before I sign of for the hight any preference for a ship in the show it can be a crack ship nsfw
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BrendanTheBored

@ShelledCrane017 sounds like 12 and 13 gonna be short and it's a good starting roadmap
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ShelledCrane017

Chapter 11 is out

BrendanTheBored

@ShelledCrane017 fun,  also I just realized you started this story on 9/11
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            Yes I know, this is a very bad joke and I'm never getting employed if they find my wattpad account
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ShelledCrane017

Here’s my outline I use for the story if your interested? 
          
          Character Names
          
          Uzi Doorman
          N
          V
          J
          Lizzy
          Khan Doorman
          Nori
          Thad
          Tessa
          
          Relationships status
          
          Uzi Doorman / N are in a relationship(Dating) 
          Uzi Doorman / N / V aren't in a relationship but they do flirt with each other
          J is single and alone
          Khan Doorman love doors as he created all door for the worker drone colony
          Khan Doorman / Nori Doorman are married and are parents of Uzi
          Lizzy / V are just starting their relationship.
          
          What their doing at the start
          
          Uzi is in the Bunker going to school, her body is half Uzi and half Absolute Solver which controles her tail and can speak to Uzi
          J is fixing a Landing Pod at the bottom of a cavern after she was knocked out while fighting N, Uzi and V with Tessa / Absolute Solver, she feels bad for betraying them
          N is with Uzi just supporting her
          

BrendanTheBored

@ShelledCrane017 and as I said before I don't really do under 10 page stories nor do I do 1-shots cuz u can't rlly do interesting stories on like 3 pages
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BrendanTheBored

@ShelledCrane017 the only thing I don't like are just retellings of the main story but u add like one character and no changes, like I read this story where they added a Y/N who just talked or did fights scene but it was 95% just basic MD, I saw this other one with a male Y/N cyn who just speedran ep 6, maybe not good writing but hey at least its different
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BrendanTheBored

@ShelledCrane017 mainly just something original, fanfics are all basically just "what if" like what if the cast actually did stuff after ep 8, what if cyn was just goob without power, what if every single female character was a yandere to Y/N(this is one of the top 5 stories rn)
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ShelledCrane017

Finnished chapter 10

ShelledCrane017

@BrendanTheBored their was 2 places were I referred to J as I for some reason
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ShelledCrane017

@BrendanTheBored nice catch, it’s supposed to be J was left not I was left
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