BrhannadaArmour

I created a new forum https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/haimamtaladrumavanam where I am sharing my thoughts, fan fiction, and favourite music for Saṃskṛta literature (Mahābhārata, Rāmāyaṇa, Bṛhatkathā ...) and Marathi TV (occasional Hindi TV).
          	
          	I am tagging my known readers (sorry if I disturbed you), but everyone is welcome to participate, so tell your friends!
          	
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BrhannadaArmour

I created a new forum https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/haimamtaladrumavanam where I am sharing my thoughts, fan fiction, and favourite music for Saṃskṛta literature (Mahābhārata, Rāmāyaṇa, Bṛhatkathā ...) and Marathi TV (occasional Hindi TV).
          	  
          	  I am tagging my known readers (sorry if I disturbed you), but everyone is welcome to participate, so tell your friends!
          	  
          	  @PrincessBlack199815 @bubliebublie @gopugokul
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WhisperingWordsmith7

Hello! I'm excited to share my new story, 'Sath Tujhi', with you. Written in fluent Marathi and also translated into English for a broader audience. If you enjoy nostalgic 90s vibes and compelling narratives, I'd love for you to give it a read and share your thoughts. Your feedback is greatly appreciated!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376090799?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=WhisperingWordsmith7

BrhannadaArmour

I created a new forum https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/haimamtaladrumavanam where I am sharing my thoughts, fan fiction, and favourite music for Saṃskṛta literature (Mahābhārata, Rāmāyaṇa, Bṛhatkathā ...) and Marathi TV (occasional Hindi TV).
          
          I am tagging my known readers (sorry if I disturbed you), but everyone is welcome to participate, so tell your friends!
          
          @0104ng @aesthetix_assetz @aliyarehann @AmishaR3 @Anamika_Bhandari @AnnapooraniT @Anu0005 @appa002 @Arcanely_arcane01 @ArunimaChaulia @Ashalatha_reddy @autmntales @avinashk142 @axitavaghani @bips_freedom @book_reader_Aanya @Captainamerica07 @ChadtheGreat369 @chapterhappy22 @Chiilllii @Chinusnehagupta @Cicilyanju @dc_creattiions @deepakkumarmaheswari @DeeptiKasabe @Deeptikasabe6 @Devil510Queen @Dmi3onreads @elvarose02 @fantasytales9 @GauravShinde1 @glittering_stars_ @GundaChi_2503 @HalisaFathimaPS @heersha37 @Herrrmoine15 @iam_charming_girl @iam_myname @i_love_raghvi @jamin964 @KavyaSriJuventhula @KimParkNick24 @Kinblossom22 @kirmadaaaa @KrishaSingh004 @krsunn @lostbattle11 @Ikdpv1 @Madhubalatk @Maduthu @Mariya777kutty @MHRWFANPAGE @MrunaliniShegamwar @nandseetal @Naazneen0304 @ni19534 @nitya_ss @oyewriteryukti @Pallavikumari2226 @Pankti2521 @phylloclade @pinkypintoo @pranjal_571 @preksays @PriyankaSawakhande @priyashree716 @QamarKhan5 @RadhaJariwala @RajkumarArun @rakka123 @Rakhi906 @RashmiRekhaAich @Reet_0205 @RemaMondal @ResmaJ @RinkiPorte @RiyaArya4 @Riyab19 @Roa121 @Rosicana @s_honey_g @SachithraWijenayake @saisha101994 @saishiXcreations @sanasonu1 @saniya1423 @SeemaGilkar @ShitalC @shweta_arora_ @Simba2987 @SkBeautifulBae_ @snowyflakes1977 @sore_bat_eye @Sreenanda1234 @Stardust_tales @Starflies05 @suchandra20031989 @Suchisubha @suvachana @SuzaneNajeeb @SwathimonishHari @sweetiepie_always @sweetiepie_mishbir @syleuven1 @tenquilla_shots @TejasviThakur8 @Teju2530 @toobaansari819 @Tyagikanchan @Udeshi173 @UrshithaM @user_starlight @user20988563 @Vi0669 @xynahs94 @yaminishahare8973 @YashikaRajpal @zoveya211

BrhannadaArmour

I created a new forum https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/haimamtaladrumavanam where I am sharing my thoughts, fan fiction, and favourite music for Saṃskṛta literature (Mahābhārata, Rāmāyaṇa, Bṛhatkathā ...) and Marathi TV (occasional Hindi TV).
            
            I am tagging my known readers (sorry if I disturbed you), but everyone is welcome to participate, so tell your friends!
            
            @PrincessBlack199815 @bubliebublie @gopugokul
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shaiilii

 When will you update "antrāya timir'opasāntaaye" story? Like it is  hurtful but still grounded in reality. Well, we all love to live in a fantasy world where we just want a quick reunion of a couple but I know as a reality based writer you need to make the story relatable. so this story is little painful for me from RR's point of view but i trust the author that you will give a good ending.
          Thank you❤

BrhannadaArmour

@Shaiilii Honestly, I haven't fixed an ending for "Antarāya-timir'opaśāntaye," and whatever ideas I have for its plot progression will take shape as I tell the earlier story of "Hasta-prāpya-stabaka-namito bāla-Mandāra-vṛkṣaḥ," for which I have a clear map.
            
            In your story "Our Gift Of Love," the happy ending doesn't make up for Raghav missing priceless time with his child. He doesn't know that he has a child, so it's not as painful as what Raghav expects in "Antarāya-timir'opaśāntaye." My intention is to explore the dramatic potential of Raghav as a father who knows his son will learn about him from others. Their love will be mixed with shame and distance. Of course, the love between Pallavi and Raghav balances their conflicting values in this story, and that should remain.
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BrhannadaArmour

@leader_san My favourite character is Kuntī - she comes across as a real person consistently protecting her social position. When Pāṇḍu asks her to invoke a fourth God to father a child, Kuntī says no, then people would call her cāriṇī, and with the fifth, bandhakī. Then she resents Mādrī for getting twins and doesn't give her a chance to have more sons. Even when Pāṇḍu lies dead, Kuntī feels jealous that Mādrī saw his aroused face, and asserts her right as his senior wife to follow him in death. Later, Kuntī exhorts her sons to war because Kṛṣṇā Draupadī's humiliation shouldn't go unpunished. And Kuntī tells Karṇa that he's her son, hoping that he'll support Yudhiṣṭhira, but she makes a conscious choice not to tell Yudhiṣṭhira about Karṇa until after the war is over.
          
          Kuntī tells Kṛṣṇa, "I have never made a distinction between Dhṛtarāṣṭra's children and Pāṇḍu's - by that truth, may I see you and Pāṇḍu's sons emerge from this war, having killed your enemies and chosen by prosperity." (na me viśeṣo jātv āsīd Dhārtarāṣṭreṣu Pāṇḍavaiḥ, tena satyena Kṛṣṇa tvāṃ hat'āmitraṃ śriyā vṛtam asmād vimuktaṃ saṃgrāmāt paśyeyaṃ Pāṇḍavaiḥ saha) Kuntī who didn't go to forest exile with her own sons left royal comfort in her old age for the forest with Gāndhārī and Dhṛtarāṣṭra.
          
          I am curious about why Kuntī says: "I blame not myself, nor Suyodhana, but my father who entrusted me to Kunti Bhoja like property to cheats. I was a child playing with a ball in my hand when your Grandfather gave me to Kunti Bhoja as a friend to his eminent friend. So I was cheated by my father, then by my in-laws (Dhṛtarāṣṭra), scorcher of your opponent! Kṛṣṇa, I am extremely aggrieved. What have I accomplished in life?" (pitaraṃ tv eva garheyaṃ n'ātmānaṃ na Suyodhanam yen'āhaṃ Kunti-Bhojāya dhanaṃ dhūrtair iv'ārpitā. bālāṃ mām Āryakas tubhyaṃ krīḍantīṃ kandu-hastakām adadāt Kunti-Bhojāya sakhā sakhye mah'ātmane. sā'haṃ pitrā ca nikṛtā śvaśuraiś ca paraṃtapa atyanta-duḥkhitā Kṛṣṇa. kiṃ jīvita-phalaṃ mama?)

BrhannadaArmour

I'd like to share my response to the question: "Which day of the week do you update?"
          
          It could be any day of the week. I don't give myself deadlines, as I am writing just for fun, whenever real life gives me time. Whatever I share isn't written in a hurry, and I don't hold back chapters when they're finished.
          
          I take breaks to read other writers' stories. I organize my notes and fit my plot points onto a timeline. I start writing pieces of the next chapter, check the episodes to which my characters are alluding, reread my story so far to remind myself of what the character has experienced and how s/he should behave in the next scene, and go on writing. As the chapter takes shape, I read through it, adding translations, introducing breaks in monologues so that the listening character can react and to give readers a sense of the physical scene. I delete lines that spoil the focus of the scene. I try out different words to improve sentences and capture exactly what a character is feeling. Then I realize that the chapter is really long. Is there a place where I could divide it without disconnecting the action or separating parallel events that should be juxtaposed? Does each chapter end on a note that something else is coming up? All right, it's time to publish, take a break, and then write the next chapter!

RadhaJariwala

Please update next chapter 

BrhannadaArmour

@RadhaJariwala Thank you for reading with interest. I have some plot points mapped for "Hasta-prāpya-stabaka-namito bāla-Mandāra-vṛkṣaḥ" and I hope to start writing a chapter after a few busy days. It will take some time, but I hope you will like what is ahead.
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