xooodalisssx
You need to like update your book ASAP
BriBee1108
chrissychr1s
YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!
BriBee1108
When you republish a chapter for no reason don't mind that but if you wanna read it over again then I wouldn't mind . Chapter 3 is coming in fast people
chrissychr1s
@BriBee1108 Bruh.... really I thought chapter 3 was uploaded, you are like the worst author ever!!!
chrissychr1s
Ugh......
BriBee1108
Okay soooo it's definitely been awhile since
I've last published anything BUT I really need feedback from anyone who is willing to spend a few minutes to read the first "chapter." I didn't write a lot only because I would hate to write three million pages then scrap it because it sucks. I appreciate any constructive criticism just message me. And yes Untitled is the title. I know lame but it may change if the story evolves.
theonewhoisone
Damn child u know how ta make a funny ass story i voted wow just wow briah
gyu_shii
Wow? Really bri
xooodalisssx
That's nice
BriBee1108
I am unconditionally in love with reading and writing! I just can't get enough of it!