BriBillau

Alright life is kicking me in the ass so I'm gonna start a new story because it kind of speaks to me.

AlyaAdel5

Hey everyone, I am looking for someone that would like to take over my story from here and complete it for me. I have written almost what you would call ten characters but can't finish it any longer. So if anyone is interested and would like to help me out with this story please send me a message. If you message me, More info about how I want the story to be and of course The story will be published on your account so it will be your property,but I have the idea of the story in my head, and it will be amazing if you miss update me once in a while about how it goes. So again if you are interested please contact me. Thank you so much.

Kiikii75

After the end of relentless I still think about Jeremy  please i  need a closure for him but with a happy ending please I don't want a sad ending I feel like my heart is broken with every story has a sad ending, please make a story for Jeremy even if it's one chapter .

flipsandbuttons

I absolutely loved Relentless! It’s so different from other books, a lot more realistic to what people go through. Though there may have been spelling errors, the way you write is just captivating and really mature. I hope you continue this path into great success!!

BriBillau

@j3llyb3ans Thank you! The spelling errors will be corrected during the editing process. I'm currently working on Innocence so once I get through the killer writers block, I will begin editing Relentless. Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to leave such a generous comment.
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shits_on_you

I just finished relentless, it's an amazing book and I enjoyed every step of it,but u know I'm really looking forward to read Tyler's story, a very good feeling about it

shits_on_you

He is very interesting,very focused as well i liked that...he is obviously one of the rich and successful fic characters and of cause very gay and i guess he is aware too but doesn't trust to date
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BriBillau

@shits_on_you  Thank you so much! Tell me, what kind of vision do you see for Tyler's story? Where do you see his life going?
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MishMishYouIsFine

Relentless is a wonderful book; thank you so much for writing it. I admit though that I'm crying actual tears for Jeremy. I hope I'm not the only reader for whom anxiety about Jeremy's wellbeing was a common thread through almost all the chapters. I still wonder why he showered so long and my heart aches for him, thinking of his poverty and heartbreak. I have so many unanswered questions and hopes for him and I'm not sure you ever even intended for him to be more than a two-dimensional character. But I'm attached. I (not so) secretly imagine him and his bully roommate together in a one-shot or something... If that ever happens please let me know!

MishMishYouIsFine

I think the word I'm looking for is closure. Readers love it, maybe even need it. But it's more than that here, I think; the way Jeremy was written (and this may have been unintentional), I actually genuinely developed a vested interest in him as a reader. I want that sweet cinnamon roll to be okay. And to put my mind at ease, I would appreciate it so much if you could add another part for him. You know like that extra scene at the end of a movie, after the resolution and the credits? Something like that :)
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BriBillau

And thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Always makes my day to hear comments like that.
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BriBillau

@MishMishYouIsFine  I've given some thought to it but I never thought anyone would be interested in reading more about him. I'll think about his story further and possibly will right a short story or a one shot about him to answer any questions.
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