I’m honored that you reached out and normally I would happily read your work. However, the subject matter of your story makes me uncomfortable. I am a high school teacher and do not find it interesting or “fun” to read about illegal relationships involving a student and a teacher no matter their ages.
What advice I can give you is that it’s going to take more than one chapter to get views. Keep writing. Something that won’t work is messaging random people asking for views. Most likely, you’ll get reported and ignored.
One of my favorite quotes is by Cyril Connolly. “Better to write for yourself and have no public than to write for the public and have no self.”