Bri_Fizzy

Might be able to continue muh story. That would be pretty amazing :D

Did some recomended changes. Feel free to re-read and re-vote :D

Meh.. v.v I know my story is slowly getting to point but I like detail.. After all it will become an anime :3
          

@MindlessOnA100k Welcomes

Hey buddy :> *le waves* Thanks for fanning.